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Sat May 01, 2010 9:08 pm
Elinor says...



So, for a few reasons, including but not limited to the need to review more, an increasing amount of homework, and regressing organizational skills, I've decided to set up my own WRFF thread in which I'll be able to take requests and have all the reviews I need to do in one handy list. If you want to see some of my completed reviews, you can click here to go to my portfolio.

So, fire away, and ask any questions here!

What I will review

-Short Stories
-Poetry
-Art & Photography
-Novels

What I will not review

-Scripts
-Lyrics
-Other
-Fanfiction

To submit a request, please provide a link to the piece and I promise that I will put you right on the queue! I should get the review back to you no later then forty-eight hours after the date of the original request. If I haven't by then, you can always bug me! I accept all requests unless you request something that falls into what I will not review.
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Sun May 02, 2010 12:05 am
Sins says...



Hey there Elinor :)

Could you please review someone else's work for me? It's by Lalaland. She could do with a good review and I know that yours are that exactly!

Title: Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes ~ Her
Genre: Romance (Short story)
Synopsis/Theme: You'd have to ask Lalaland really... :lol: Suicide, maybe?
Link: Here you go

Thanks in advance!
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Sun May 02, 2010 1:47 pm
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Done!

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Mon May 03, 2010 11:13 pm
captain.classy says...



:) hehe

Title: Soldiers Blind
Genre: Dramatic Poetry
Synopsis/Theme: If looks could kill, I would wish soldiers blind.
Link: post698622.html#p698622





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Tue May 04, 2010 12:29 am
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Done!

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Wed May 05, 2010 12:08 am
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BondGirl007 and AlizaYazdani requested that I review their works via chat. So, I'm going to get to them and any other requests will be right after.

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Wed May 05, 2010 1:16 am
aszecsei says...



Hello!

I feel nervous :) First time asking for a review from a never-before-met person.

Title: Spilling Out
Genre: Dramatic Poetry
Synopsis/Theme: Coping with destruction
Link: Voila!

Thanks very much!
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Wed May 05, 2010 1:21 pm
Sionarama says...



Hey Elinor!! Will you review:
Title: The Allergic Reaction
Genre: other story
Synopsis/Theme: Coping with an allergy
Link: Alakazam!!
Also:
Title: Skin
Genre: Fantasy Fiction (its actually scary).
Synopsis/Theme: a boy with family goes on a trip to country USA, and finds the scariest thing of his life.
Link: purple cows!!
OOPS!!! Please just press my name to get them!!!
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Wed May 05, 2010 5:43 pm
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Hey, Eli, could you review this for me?
Title: 7 Minutes
Genre: Romantic Short Story
Synopsis/Theme: Breaking out of your shell, or maybe defining limits
Link:7 Minutes

It's a short story, so far anyway.
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Thu May 06, 2010 3:59 am
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I'm done, everyone! My queue is empty right now, so I'd love some more requests!

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Fri May 07, 2010 2:19 pm
Sionarama says...



will you review Our Dance by me? it's a poem. Just click my name!!!!
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Fri May 07, 2010 11:07 pm
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Done!

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Sat May 08, 2010 7:14 am
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Title:(Goosebumps) Night at Murder Mansion, part 3
Genre:Fan-fiction, Horror, Kids
Synopsis/Theme: 'Bout a boy who moves to a new town and finds himself in the scariest castle ever.
Link:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic62583.html
(Just a heads up, Elinor: I put this series in fan-fiction because the writing style and formatt are silimar to the book written by R.L.Stine; however, the plot and characters are all originally mine (and my brothers).
Thanks!
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Sun May 09, 2010 2:03 am
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Title: Straw in the My (pending)
Genre:Lyric Poetry
Synopsis/Theme:Absolute randomness, literally.
Link:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic63160.html
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Sun May 09, 2010 8:48 pm
Elinor says...



Done and done!

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