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Soul-Crusher is looking for souls to crush! (Accepting)



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Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:11 pm
Sachiko says...



Except not really. I don't think I'm very good at harsh critiques.

I will review the following:

Short Stories of any Genre

Art & Photography

What I am horrid at reviewing but will attempt to anyway:

Poetry

Non-fiction

I generally try and avoid novels as I generally have no idea what's going on and will probably not be able to give a sufficient review. However, if you're looking for Grammar nitpicks or anything of the sort, I could probably be convinced otherwise. :D
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Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:27 am
Jiggity says...



GO READ MAH STAWRY. You've already commented on chapter one. There are two others...help with either one would be good.

I MAY EVEN BUY YOU SHOES IF YOU HALP ME.

I absolutely despise the first half of chapter two now, I want to kill it. Chapter Three I'm okay with, just might be a little soon for it.

So, yus. You, review. I, get shoes. Win-win.
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Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:29 am
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Chapter two is all set, Jigs! :D I'll probably get to chapter three sometime tomorrow.
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Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:28 am
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*gnaws on your face*

You are awesome. Here, have some loff.

*loffs*
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Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:14 am
MiaParamore says...



Hi there. Would you mind reviewing this for me? its non-fiction : Just 1411 left
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Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:28 am
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All set, Shubhi!
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Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:28 pm
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Why hello there.
Could you please crush my soul? :smt005

This is a rough draft, but I'd like your opinion on it! Thanks.

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Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:39 pm
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Hi, I am a beginning writer and I was hoping for someone to review this. Please review if you can! Thank you!
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Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:25 pm
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Your pieces are all set, Skins and WritingWords!
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Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:46 pm
Rosendorn says...



topic62866.html

Please? :D (That segment's only about 700 words)
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Sun May 02, 2010 4:25 am
Hannah says...



SACHI, PLEASE?!

Her Last Drink Is Coffee!? That is the first part, and the second part is in 'related links'!! Please!? I love you.
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Sun May 02, 2010 5:59 am
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Rosey and Hannah, I'll try and get to your pieces sometime Sunday/Monday. :D This weekend has been busy for me.
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