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Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:13 am
Firearris says...



I finally realized how much more I really should review, and, well, here we are!

I'm willing to do anything, though I have limitations on a few things.

Fan-Fictions:

I'd rather not do these since chances are, I don't know the story they are based on. But I am willing to give it a try, but bear with me if I mess up on the critique due to not knowing the story that well.

Chapters:

I'm willing to do several chapters, though I request that you only post up to three chapters at a time and please wait for me to do those three before you post any more chapters of your story. xP

Poetry:

I actually love doing poetry, but I prefer it if the poem isn't a page or so long. =P

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Other than those, I have no limitations on genres and works, and I want absolutely nothing in return.

Come and get 'em while they're still hot!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.





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Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:48 pm
Sins says...



Hey Firearris :)

Could you review these? pretty please, with a cherry on top? ^_^

Can You See Me? Chapter One/Prologue
Can You See Me? Chapter Two ~ Part One
Can You See Me? Chapter Two ~ Part Two

Just do the one if it's too much. :wink:

Thanks,
xoxo Skins
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 4:04 pm
Sopster says...



Hello :)

It'd be great if you could review my poem: Roberto who was greedy. (the link's at the bottom)

I've had a handful of comments but no ones actually said why they like it or dislike it. :lol:

Thank you!

-Sophie x

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Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:50 pm
eldEr says...



Hi! I would absoultely love it if you could review this for me. It's sorta gushy and corny...but hey! Romance has its wonderful rites to be so!

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Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?





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Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:34 am
Firearris says...



Sorry for the lateness, everyone! I got overloaded with work. I'll get on those as soon as possible! :D
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.





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Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:14 am
whatevr says...



Please can you review this, Mama Arris?

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Literally whatevr





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Sat Jun 17, 2023 10:24 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it.
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