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Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:54 pm
Esther Sylvester says...



(EDIT: I am really sorry to all of those whom I have not reviewed in a prompt time. There have been a few incidents in my life which have made me incredibly busy, and unable to review your works in a timely fashion. Fortunately, those times are over and I can now get to your works as soon as I can. Thank you for your understanding.)

Hello those who have chosen to open this thread! I've decided to start one of these WRFF things. If you clicked here, that must mean you want a review! I'm glad. I will review any rating. Lets get down to the details:

What I would like to review

:arrow: Fantasy Fiction
:arrow: Romantic fiction
:arrow: Science fiction
:arrow: Okay, basically any fiction
:arrow: Scripts (there are not enough of them)
:arrow: Essays and non fiction

What I will not review

:arrow: Poetry. (I stink at it)
:arrow: Stories with too much profanity. (The occasional curse I can handle, but using it needlessly is just a little annoying to me)
:arrow: Stories that already have five reviews or more, since anything that needs pointing out has been pointed out.


Requirements

Simply post the link for your story here! You can post up to two links, if both of them are only around 1000 words or less. Otherwise, just post one. I don't need any payment. I do this just for fun. Be mindful: I will get to the reviews withing 48 hours. If there isn't a way I can review it, or it doesn't fit the requirements above, I will send you a personal PM letting you know the fact. I won't let you wait for nothing, you know!

Let's get jiggy with this thing. :D
Last edited by Esther Sylvester on Mon May 03, 2010 1:42 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:03 pm
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eldEr says...



This is chapter.2 of my novel, so it might be slightly confusing. I have the Prologue and Chapter.1 up as well, but you don't have to look at them unless you want to.
Here's a link.
post687839.html#p687839
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?





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Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:18 pm
Sins says...



Hey Esther! :)

Will you review this for me please? Also, could you review some of the other chapters of it? If you can be bothered, that is! If not, that's fine. :)

xoxo Skins
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:45 pm
Esther Sylvester says...



Isha wrote:This is chapter.2 of my novel, so it might be slightly confusing. I have the Prologue and Chapter.1 up as well, but you don't have to look at them unless you want to.
Here's a link.
post687839.html#p687839


Review completed! Can't wait for more, by the way.
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Tue Apr 13, 2010 5:29 pm
Esther Sylvester says...



The stories so far have been so good. I hope I get to review more soon.
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Tue Apr 13, 2010 7:18 pm
SophieSays says...



I have posted the second part of my story. It used to be called 'The Man in the Top Hat/Emilie's Diary', but it's now changed to 'Clements, Lemon and Crunch'. I'd really appreciate another review! If you'd like me to review anything in return, let me know!
Sophie :)
If you would like a review, please visit my review shop: topic61400.html :)





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Wed Apr 14, 2010 6:22 pm
Esther Sylvester says...



Hey Sophie! I looked for the second part of your story but all I could find was the first. I reviewed the first part, all though there really wasn't much to cover since you had so many reviews already. Good job with your story!
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 7:09 am
Ikafe says...



Hey. This is Chapter 5 of my novel In The Dark. I already have all the other chapters posted. Chapter 5 is going to be quite confusing for you if you haven't read the other ones. But you don't have to read them if you don't want to.

----> topic62019.html

Please, I totaly need help with my writting. :wink: Be as rough as you want to. I learn from my mistakes.

Thanks. Ikafe :wink:
"Even in the darkness, my heart will you..."
"How do you escape from yourself?"
"...open your eyes, and see..."

Ikafe





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Sat Apr 17, 2010 4:08 pm
Esther Sylvester says...



Review completed Ikafe! *insert victory music*
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 10:58 pm
Winterblossoms says...



Hi, I would like a review on this:

topic62134.html

It's in art and photography, though. :3 Nevertheless, have at thee. XD
Innuendo, oh my~ ♥





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Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:05 am
Maddy says...



Hey Esther,
You dont mind reviewing a fan-fiction-thats-technically-not-fan-fiction-because-its-my-own-characters-and-setting-but-themed-in-a-way-similar-to-Goosebumps?
I need the second chapter to be reviewed (post690775.html) but I would suggest you just read the first one (post680204.html) to help you, then proceed to review the second chapter.
Whew.
Thanks in advance.
-Maddy
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Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:07 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hi Esther. Would you mind reviewing my novel, A criminal's Heart'
Here's he link to the main page where you'll find all the chapters of the novel:
A criminal's Heart

I know its much so you just review whatever you like but you should be reading the whole story to know it and review other parts.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sun Apr 18, 2010 4:45 pm
Maisie says...



Hi Esther!

Can you review the first chapter of my novel please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post691501.html#p691501





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Sun Apr 18, 2010 5:11 pm
Ikafe says...



Hi Esther:) I started to write a new novel it's called Forever&Always could you review it for me please. Be as rough as you want.
I only have the Prologue and Chapter one done:)
Here are the links-----
Prologue-----> topic62169.html
Chapter 1-----> topic62225.html

Thanks:) Ikafe :wink:
"Even in the darkness, my heart will you..."
"How do you escape from yourself?"
"...open your eyes, and see..."

Ikafe





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Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:42 pm
Ikafe says...



Hey thanks for the review:) And no I didn't stop writting my vampire novel:)
"Even in the darkness, my heart will you..."
"How do you escape from yourself?"
"...open your eyes, and see..."

Ikafe








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