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Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:32 pm
Jas says...



Thanks Skins! I er made a mistake though. I gave you the wrong link. >.<
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:42 pm
Skins says...



Haha, that's fine. xD

I'll review the other one, if you want.
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Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:23 pm
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RELLEH? YAY! Okay so:

post838938.html#p838938

Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:50 pm
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tinkembell says...



Hi!
I'd appreciate it if you could review this viewtopic.php?t=78580 for me XD
Oh and I realised the batteries aren't included *sighs* I shall go find some!


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And your semi bribery-ness

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Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:37 pm
MiaParamore says...



Awesome Skins! I am begging for help again! ^_^

After your motivational speech about my writing, I did think about it, and did find that it's half decent as it was before I came here, so I should merry with that thought for the time being.

I wrote the new beginning of Turning the Tables! Here's the link, and it would be ever sweet of you to review meh: Turning the Tables (1.1)

P.S. It's not that groggy part I wrote before, but something I had in minds before that scene. So, I think it should be fun. And I didn't get inspire with the club scene from your story. I had been writing it before you posted. :wink:

LOL, here goes Shubhi explaining herself again! x3!
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Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:25 pm
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Riveneye says...



ooo I think I found one of my new fantasy fiction reviewers. You and Azila looked pretty good. I'm just getting back into the swing of things and I need some people to review some of my stories for this story novel collection type thingy. None of the stories are related so you should be fine.

Here's the two I need help with now

#1 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=78099
#2 viewtopic.php?t=78101

I gotta get reviews on these and do some edits before I can put up the last three stories in the book. Also need to do some reviewing on other people's work. (Been inactive for awhile.) I'll probably come back for seconds then.
Well Good luck, Thanks and I hope you'll review this.
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Wed Apr 06, 2011 9:48 am
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Hey there :) I've heard pretty amazing things about your reviewing so I decided to pay your profile a visit... then a found this, clicked the link and here we are!!

I'd love if you could review: novel.php?id=1013
any of the chapters really! I posted the link so that you can read the whole thing if you want to follow the story. Alternatively you can just pick a chapter (preferably the ones with the least reviews).
Thanks!!! :smt001

*Oh and I need very nit-picky review! All the notes from reviews are put into my files for later :) So grammer, characters, overall impression - the lot!
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Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:10 am
Flower~Child says...



Hello dear, would you mind giving me a review? post842750.html#p842750
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Mon Apr 11, 2011 2:52 pm
Skins says...



Aaaaall done!
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Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:11 pm
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Kagi says...



Well,

This is for you.
'Tis all.
I figure this;
It may be horrible but that's what you're for right?
Will make you suffer enough.
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Sun Apr 17, 2011 2:51 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey, Skins!

If you don't mind, which I know you won't, and I would ask you anyways even if you would, please review Call Me Mr. Ailuro for me, please?

Thanks and Please! It would be grateful of you. :D

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Wed Apr 20, 2011 9:11 pm
Skins says...



All reviews are done, but from today until a week or so has passed, I'm not accepting requests because I'll be busy on a boat in the middle of the ocean that's around Egypt. As you do.
Cat.




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Sun May 22, 2011 9:57 am
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaand... I'm open again! :)
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Tue Jun 21, 2011 8:09 pm
Kagi says...



Hai.

I haven't requested a review from you in a while have I? Or have I?
Well, either way, I'd love you to take a peek at this for me.

Read the spoiler first if you don't mind. ;)
Take as long as you need,

Kagi :)

*did you see me practicing my niceness?*
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