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Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:56 am
Skins, I've come to depend on your reviews...
I would like the works. Nitpick and overall
First chapter of an old novel.
Everyone's favorite life coach.
Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:51 pm
This is general fiction.
It's just a short intro to a novel I'm working on. I just want to know if it's too heavy/ too much description...that kinda' thing.
We'd rather die with our bones of youth.
Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:40 pm
Skinsy! May I request a review from you? It's fantasy fiction. A small prologue... I would really appreciate your opinion on it.
Thank you! (:
Your = Possession
Your shoes are so sweet!
You're = Omission
You're quite strange...
If you are confused about which to put, simply say in your mind "you are" and see if that fits the sentence. If not, you are looking for
Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:54 pm
Yes, so sir, I'd like some review.
You've read this piece before, but I've really worked hard over it, and so here it is. I don't need the chapter 1.2 reviewed, but if you want to, I don't mind!
SO kind of you(in advance)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"
Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:31 pm
Hey Skins, it would be great if you could review this:
It would be great if you could focus on the style, the characters, and overall impact. Thanks a lot!
"You either die a hero, or live long enough to see yourself become a villain- TDK"
-My Bloody Valentine Reviews-
Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:51 am
I was wondering if you would mind terribly reviewing this:
If you could that would just be fantastic! Feel free to tear it to shreds.
It is better to travel well than to arrive.
Sun Mar 06, 2011 11:46 am
Would just like to say you're fantastic and the efforts you go to do keep up to date with your WRFF thread is astounding and an example of excellence to us all would-be reviewers
Keep up the awesome work.
(you are as radically unusual and cool as this image)
Want 3 Reviews?
Tue Mar 08, 2011 11:27 pm
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long.
Here is a link....
Thanks a lot!
Really appreciate it!
Thu Mar 10, 2011 3:53 pm
Could you perhaps review
Thanks in advance.
Fri Mar 18, 2011 4:33 am
So because your such an amazing reviewer, would you want to review my latest piece? It is a short story posted in general fiction. If you decide to take the order, feel free to rip it to shreds! Thanks!
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014
Need a review? Feel free to ask me!
Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:44 am
Would you care to review my first chapter to a maybe-going-somewhere-maybe-not thing?
Girl from Daphnis-- Ch.1
It's Romantic fiction. So far. I'm not sure it what genre it will end up if I ever finish this.
Thanks in advance,
NaPoWriMo: Zorro taught me everything I know.
Wed Mar 23, 2011 11:59 pm
Aaaaaaaaaaaand, I'm done.
Also, I'm going away for a few days, so I wont' be able to do any reviews. Because of that, I'd avoid asking me for any really. Once I'm back though, I shall open this again.
Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:35 pm
I'm back now, so request away.
Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:36 pm
Could you review that please
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.
Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:30 pm
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