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Nitpicking is good, but some overall comments are also welcome

D'awe, Rhino. You know what's sad? How long it's been since I've had a Rhino-review. D:

And for once, it isn't fantasy! (Can you believe it!? I can't.)
So, if you would, because you adore me and my awesome glowy-ness, review the first chapter of this:

All the Perfect Colors

for me? :3

<3

Hey once again! (if you remember be, that is )
It's been a while since my last YWS forum visit!

Do you still accept review requests? I started writing a fanfiction story based on one manga... but I posted the first chapter, because it's basically an introduction of the original character, so it's readable for everyone. I'm very unconfident, because it's my first time writing fanfiction :S So I would REEEALLY appreciate if you could review the first chapter for me! And tell me if I chose the right direction at all! I'm totally fishing for reviews

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I was wondering if you would review a piece of my story. (Its an excerpt of a back round of someone that's not a main character but I thought I would make it nice and pretty anyways)
Its called " I can't keep you Secret." I don't know how to link but it should be easy to find...
~Thank you
~Berlynn Rae

will you review my work "I can't keep you Secret" 85267

If you're tempted? An overall review will do fine.

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Hunted ch. 1 please. Overall, and nitpicking. As nitpicky as you can get, but if there's something wrong with it as a whole, please tell me. Don't be too easy on me, rip it apart.

Hey Skinsy, can I ask a huge favor?

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It's a fantasy novel that's like my baby right now <3

Thanks so much!! (And I like grammar & stuff ;D)

I'll get to everything as soon as I can!

I'm going back to school on Wednesday, so I have no idea how busy I'm going to be. I also have a lot of stuff to do that I should have done during summer, but I was too lazy to do it all... Because of all of that, I can't guarantee that I'll be able to get to these insanely soon. I hope you guys don't mind bearing with me!

You and your many pages of review requests . In any case, would you mind taking a look at this chapter for me? It may not make much sense unless you read the prologue and the chapter before it but up till this point, I haven't had any feedback on it.

That being said, I'll review anything of yours in return, including multiple reviews if you'd like! I also have two very tempting badges .

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It's long

Hello! Do you mind reviewing my story? It isn't finished yet, but the last chapter should be up some time tomorrow. It'll only be four parts in all. Words less than 10k (that's including the un-posted chapter. I'm still making some final touches to that one before putting it up tomorrow haha).

And Then There Were Two

Gimme your fiction to review. C'mon, I dare you. C'mon.

Don't just look at me, goddamit!

Basically, this is now officially open once again.

This is my child. Shred it to within an inch of its life.

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Hey Skins, would you mind reviewing this whenever you get a chance? Feel free to destroy it.