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Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:29 pm
RayquazaKid says...



Hello everyone, welcome to my shop.

With a review I can provide:
- Tips on sentence structure and word usage.
- The pointing out of grammar and spelling mistakes.
- An honest opinion on the work.
- Tips on formatting, such as paragraphs and sentence placement.

I can recognize style, and some people tell me I have an eye for things ( being me, I beg to differ). I can also point out what may be missing from a work, from character personalties to descriptions.

As to what I can or cannot review, they are as follows.

I cannot review poetry, as I do not understand the finer aspects of it, and I think I could not give an adequate review.

I also may not be able to be adequate with Romantic fiction, but I do feel like I can do it. Please be aware that reviews in this area may not be as good.

One more thing, if you wish for me to review fan fiction, please provide a short description of the source material (at least the information needed to understand the story), so that I may better understand what I am reading.

That said, I will review practically anything, be it historical fiction, science fiction, or not even fiction at all.

And it is all FREE.

One last thing, reviews can usually be done within 24 hours, though of course that depends on various factors (school and how busy I am are the biggest ones).

Thank you all for taking the time to visit my shop. :)

For you consideration,

RayquazaKid
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Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:36 am
MiaParamore says...



Hi Can you review A Crimuinal's Heart in Other Fiction?

A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-2
A criminal's heart chapter-3

I knwo it's very much so take your time. PM me of what you think.
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I might have to bend it back
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Sat Apr 10, 2010 3:56 pm
RekatsRovert says...



Would you review my fantasy fiction? Much appreciated! :D

topic61533.html
Winter sun catches, dog fox through thin hedges;
throws his long shadow north, to the emptiness.





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Sat Apr 10, 2010 9:18 pm
RayquazaKid says...



I'll get to them as soon as possible. :)

Shubhi, you want me to PM the review? I could put it on the thread too...
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Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:06 pm
Sins says...



Hey Ray! That rhymes... :lol:

Could you review this for me please, once you're done with the others?

Thanks!

xoxo Skins
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:55 pm
RayquazaKid says...



Definitely Skins, I'll get on it once I'm done with the others. :)
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:39 pm
emmylou1995 says...



Could you review these two things for me please? I can give you a review in return if you PM me. Thanks!

Prologue- topic60846.html
First Chapter- topic61776.html
When all you have is nothing, there is alot to go around.





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Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:54 pm
RayquazaKid says...



All done! Enjoy the reviews everyone! :)
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Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:30 pm
Sins says...



Hey RK :)

Fancy doing me a review?

I think you've actually reviewed the second chapter of this, if I remember correctly. I don't like this chapter and would appreciate the help!

Thanks,

xoxo Skins
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:35 pm
RayquazaKid says...



Yes, definitely skins :)
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 9:15 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



Hey there RK,
can you review my novel for me? I'm not sure if you do that sort of thing, but if you don't I really just need a review on the last chapter since I have zero so far. I would really appreciate if you would review them all though.

P.S. The link to my novel is in my signature.

Thanks in advance,
~Danie
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 9:57 pm
RayquazaKid says...



Well PinkAngel, I cannot do a whole novel. The advanced critiques section of the forum could do that for you, but they have a different way of doing things over there. I can do an individual chapter for you if you want me to. Just name one and I'll get right on it. :)
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Sat Apr 24, 2010 6:12 am
MiaParamore says...



Thanks RK for all the reviewing you've done till to date. Would you mind reviewing my Non-Fiction piece? Here's the link: Just 1411 left

Would be ever thankful to you.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:05 pm
RayquazaKid says...



Done shibi, it's been posted in the thread. :)

Anyone else?
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Sun Apr 25, 2010 11:49 am
Sins says...



Hey :)

Could you review the next part of my story? You reviewed the previous chapter, if I remember correctly.

topic62452.html

Thanks in advance!
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