Young Writers Society

... Save, perhaps, non-fiction. We need to get our reviewing standard on par with other writer's sites in order to progress as a community, and I am more than willing to commence that progression.

I will be nitpicky, and harsh, but you'll be a better writer for it. I always finish up by giving tips on what your next steps should be in order to improve further.

Please only panic if I haven't responded to you within 36 hours.

A short poem: topic61267.html

Thank you. I'm happy to return the favour any time.

Hey, I'm currently working on an action adventure piece, I don't know if that will interest you but I'd really like some more opinions especially on improvements.
Here's the link if you can review:
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Thanks, I really appreciate it
DM.

Kitty's done, DM I'll do now.

Hi Standard. I have been writing a piece now for which i have posted prologue,ch-1,2,3. I know its a lot to be critiqued so can you do them step by step. I really need it.
Here's the link for prologue and you can fin reas in 'See Possible Related Research' in the upside. Let me know if you have any problem.

A Criminal's Heart-Prologue

Hey, Standard! Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my story in romantic fiction? It's called Addictions (1).

Here's the link: topic61288.html

I'm going crazy, it has at least 96 views, has enough likes so it's featured, yet it only has 2 reviews. Grr! >.<

Thanks!

-Cassie

Mind reviewing my piece? (Other fiction)

topic61376.html

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