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Mon May 02, 2011 2:27 pm
Lava says...



Done with Pointe's. Anyone else?
I BLOG!
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.





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Mon May 02, 2011 9:25 pm
silentpages says...



I would love any feedback you have on this fantasy short story of mine. ^^

viewtopic.php?t=79294

A name change and minor edits may be on the way, but I'd like a few more opinions first. :)
"Pay Attention. Pay Close Attention to everything, everything you see. Notice what no one else notices, and you'll know what no one else knows. What you get is what you get. What you do with what you get is more the point. -- Loris Harrow, City of Ember (Movie)




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Tue May 03, 2011 7:35 am
Lava says...



Silent, done!
Any one else?
I BLOG!
~
Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.





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Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:28 pm
dasiamari says...



topic81351.html Chapter one?
Know that she's back in the atmosphere I'm afraid that she'll think of me as a plain old Jain told a story 'bout a man who was to afraid to fly so he never did land. ~Train




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Tue Jun 07, 2011 1:59 am
Keitaron777 says...



Will you comment on the prologue of my new book i'm starting? viewtopic.php?t=82001 . I would really appreciate it!!
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Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:05 pm
abhi92misra says...



Hey Lava. I have attached my short story - it's a romantic one. Waiting for your review :)




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Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:35 pm
ZannaShepherd says...



Hi,
I would really appreciate a review. I have two pieces, but if you only have time for one, I'd prefer the contest entry to be critiqued.
Thank you so much Lava!

viewtopic.php?t=83615

viewtopic.php?t=83379
In order to write about life, first you must live it!

Ernest Hemingway

Hmm, must be why I only write fantasy, that's the only life I've ever lived.
~Zanna




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Mon Jul 18, 2011 4:11 pm
Kagi says...



Hey Lava,

I see Art is your thing so I'm going to ask for a bit of help although I'm not half nervous as you seem to be the 'professional' type.

I edited my slippers (that sounds so lame :o) because they inspired me (that sounds worse).
It's not by any means, good or amazing or wow, it's just for fun. It has loads to fix but it's mainly just posted for the fun of it however if you have an opinion I'd love to hear it.

So you ready to take a crack at this
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If, when you mean to type yes you type yws, you know you belong. :P




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Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:12 pm
katngo73 says...



viewtopic.php?t=84824
and please, if u can,
viewtopic.php?t=86552

if you cannot do both, just do the second one please!!

Thanks!
~Kat
“There’s no point in being grown up if you can’t act a little childish sometimes.”-The Fourth Doctor
"Who I was, what I did, that's not who I am." - Castiel
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Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:11 pm
Kagi says...



Lavs, dear.

If you have time? viewtopic.php?t=86924 <3
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