A name change and minor edits may be on the way, but I'd like a few more opinions first.
"Pay Attention. Pay Close Attention to everything, everything you see. Notice what no one else notices, and you'll know what no one else knows. What you get is what you get. What you do with what you get is more the point. -- Loris Harrow, City of Ember (Movie)
Know that she's back in the atmosphere I'm afraid that she'll think of me as a plain old Jain told a story 'bout a man who was to afraid to fly so he never did land. ~Train
Hi, I would really appreciate a review. I have two pieces, but if you only have time for one, I'd prefer the contest entry to be critiqued. Thank you so much Lava!
I see Art is your thing so I'm going to ask for a bit of help although I'm not half nervous as you seem to be the 'professional' type.
I edited my slippers (that sounds so lame ) because they inspired me (that sounds worse). It's not by any means, good or amazing or wow, it's just for fun. It has loads to fix but it's mainly just posted for the fun of it however if you have an opinion I'd love to hear it.
) because they inspired me (that sounds worse). 
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