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Reviews: 2
Sun Mar 28, 2010 11:47 pm
KinetaAlettaThyra says...



Hi! I want to help other's by reviewing!

OK, My Good Review Points:
[*]I mostly write positive stuff!
Bad Review Stuff:
[*]I don't do Harsh (this could be considered good or bad)

What I Will Review:
[*]Almost any Fiction
[*]Most poetry
[*]Most photos and pictures

What I Won't Review:
[*]ANYTHING NEGATIVE
[*]anything R-rated
[*]Anything plain nasty
[*]Anything 10 miles long, if you know what I mean

What I Might Want In Return:
[*]Joining my group (Link) :wink: :wink:
[*]Maybe review some of MY work (bellow) :wink: :wink:
1 fiction
2 fiction
3 poetry

Just post a Link and I will review! :smt003
Curiosity killed the cat,
But Satisfaction brought it back! :D
If that never happened,
How do you think I'm still here? ;)

Everyone has a right to be Stupid
but that doesn't mean you should abuse the privilege!





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Thu Apr 01, 2010 9:50 am
napalmerski says...



Yo, Kineta,
here is a kid's poem. I'm experimenting with stuff for kids. Most of the things I write are things which you warn that you do not review /qurky hateful R rated things/, but I also try to relax with clean naive stuff, and I hope you will enjoy it.

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she got a dazed impression of a whirling chaos in which steel flashed and hacked, arms tossed, snarling faces appeared and vanished, and straining bodies collided, rebounded, locked and mingled in a devil's dance of madness.
Robert Howard





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Fri Apr 02, 2010 2:29 am
KinetaAlettaThyra says...



Ok, i reviewed it. And it was...
AWSOME! :D
Better then I could ever do! :smt003
Curiosity killed the cat,
But Satisfaction brought it back! :D
If that never happened,
How do you think I'm still here? ;)

Everyone has a right to be Stupid
but that doesn't mean you should abuse the privilege!





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Gender: Male
Points: 1040
Reviews: 117
Fri Apr 02, 2010 3:05 am
napalmerski says...



Hihi, thanx for the review Kineta :D
Soon I will return the favor and pass on some more kids stuff?
she got a dazed impression of a whirling chaos in which steel flashed and hacked, arms tossed, snarling faces appeared and vanished, and straining bodies collided, rebounded, locked and mingled in a devil's dance of madness.
Robert Howard





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Points: 1282
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Fri Apr 02, 2010 3:16 am
KinetaAlettaThyra says...



Your very welcome! :D
Curiosity killed the cat,
But Satisfaction brought it back! :D
If that never happened,
How do you think I'm still here? ;)

Everyone has a right to be Stupid
but that doesn't mean you should abuse the privilege!





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Fri Apr 02, 2010 8:49 am
MiaParamore says...



Hi I want a review for my story. I have posted its prologue, chapter-1 and 2. i know its difficult so you just read prologue and chapter-1 an dgive me a review for chapter-2. I hope thats not much.
LINK:
A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
Chapter-2
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Sat Jun 17, 2023 9:24 am
DreamyAlice says...



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