It's short. It's called Last, in general fiction. Need to finish up a few touches and then I'll post the second chapter. I just want to see what else I can improve, hopefully, most of the mistakes had already been cleared up.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
It's a love story that was supposed to be for Elinor Brynn's winter love contest but I was err...a little late . If you could review it, I will send you a cookie! Thankies!
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
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