Young Writers Society

Need a review? I don't bite

I will review anything in the following forums:

Action/Adventure Fiction
Fantasy Fiction
Romantic Fiction
Other Fiction
Science Fiction

Dramatic Poetry
Lyric Poetry
Narrative Poetry
Other Poetry

Art and Photography

I'm sorry if the piece you would like reviewing dosen't appear up here.
I don't request anything in return for a review but I don't mind if you want to give me something.

I will include in my reviews:
Characterisation
Plot
Grammer
How the story reads. (Sometimes people uses words close together or they have extra words which destroy the flow, I will try and pick up on those.)
Rhythm
Rhyme
Anything else that catches my eye.


So, drop a request in here, please post the link if you know how. I will try and get your review done within 48 hours of your post but I may have other commitments.

Go wild!
(not too wild though!)

I had a crack at a crime thriller prologue, mind giving me some feedback?
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thanks,
~Ben

BenFranks your review is done
Well Done, it was a great Prologue.

Hi lyndia,
Can you do the review for my story," Finding me back".
Here's the link for prologue and chapter-1:
prologue: topic59289.html
ch-1: topic59610.html

Your reviews are done Shubi

I've just written the first chapter to my fantasy fiction, called Midnight Sensations---->http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58798.html?hilit=Midnight%20Sensations

Could you review it for me please

Hey Lydia, here's a piece of a chapter from my realistic/fantasy novel i'm writing. I've just edited it and I need an opinion on how it reads. Thanks in advance!

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Sorry everyone for the delay, I have had a busy weekend.

I will get around to those two reviews right away

Anger, Maddy, your reviews are done.

I hope that you understand what I have pointed out, if you have any questions or queries on what I have written then don't hesitate to PM me or post here.

Well Done to you both,
~Lydia

Hey! I loved to get a review on my third chapter of my ongoing novel. Here's the link. Find the previous chapters in action/ adventure fiction.
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Hello Valentine, I am busy with exam revision at the moment, I will get around to your request as soon as I can.
I wil try to do it tonight but I'm sorry if I don't get around to it.

Hello Valetine,

Your review is complete, sorry for the delay, I had exams.


Hope I helped.

Hi! I would really like for you to review one of my chapters called 'Forbidden to love'
Don't feel like you have to do it right away, whenever is fine. One of the things that I need help on is my romance; I think I'm doing fine but I've never had a personal relationship of my own, so I would really appreciate some comments on that.
Warning, it's very long.

Thanx! (I wish I could repay you but I don't know how, I'm not very good at commenting on other people's work, but if you want me to I can try!)

Can you review 'A Criminal's Heart' in Other Fiction. it would be on page 1.

Dragonet, Shubi I will get around to those reviews as quickly as I can.