Young Writers Society

Hey,
I am new and willing to review short fiction/poetry for points!

What I Will Review:
- Magical Realism
- Historical
- A mix of the two!

What I Won't Review:
- Anything with a rating over 16
- A story based completely on romance
- Anything highly miserable
- Anything over 1,500 words (but I will make exceptions if I like it )

What I Normally Focus on in Critiques:
- Things that jar when I'm reading them, e.g.words you don't need, things that don't fit.
- How you stay with the story
- Characterisation
- Any anything else that catches my reviewing eye!

If you would like me to review your stuff:
- Send me a PM and tell me what you want me to review!

What I Would Like in Return:
- Points please! Depends on how good my review is!
- If you don't think it is very good, please tell me what I could improve.

I really enjoy critiquing, and hope it will help me to improve.
Hope for some replies soon!
SophieSays

Hey I was wondering if you'd review the first chapter of my fantasy novel. It's called the Assassin's Redemption-Redrafted. You'll want to skip down to the third thing I posted. That's the edited version. Here's a link:

topic58817.html

if you can find the time, I'd really appreciate it.

Thanks

Hi Sophiesays,

I would like you to review my story "Somewhere Lost" in action/Adventure category.I haven't posted much but only prologue,Chapter 1 and 2.Thanks Sophiesays.

Sure. I've done KanenRenoir's and I'll have a look at yours shubhiloves2write!

Thanks Sophiesays and you'll surely get good points for an honest review.Just tell me that how I can give you points since I am new.

Hey!
I'm particularly aiming to improve general readability, or rather, getting rid of those things that 'jar when you're reading them,' so could you critique this for me? It's a semi-romance, but nothing too icky.

Title: Mullings of a Failed Musician
Link: viewtopic.php?t=59420

Let me know if there's anything you want me to review in return I'll give points too.

Hey, I posted another part of my story. If you can, will you check it out for me? Here's a link:

topic59120.html

I'll do it as soon as possible.

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