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Mon Feb 15, 2010 4:18 pm
KanenRenoir says...



Hello. Well I know that I have been searching high and low for people to review my stuff, so you all must be doing the same. Here's a couple guidelines.

Guidelines:

Will review: Fantasy Fiction, Action Adventure, Other Fiction, SciFi, Hist. Fiction.

Won't/Can't review: Any Poetry whatsoever, Lyrics, Fan fiction, Scripts, or Photos.

Maybe: Romance Fiction.

I love fantasy so that will be something that I will be able to critique best. If you fall under the guidelines, here's what you need to tell me

Name:
Genre:
Approximate Length:
Brief Synopsis:
Link:

Post here if you want a critique. I'll get to your story as soon as I can.
Last edited by KanenRenoir on Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Feb 18, 2010 5:20 am
Lena.Wooldridge says...



Name: It doesn't have a name yet, sorry :( Still working on that part.
Genre: Other fiction, but it might turn into Sci-Fi, not sure yet.
Length: About 1,500 words
Brief Synopsis: This is just an starting point for something that I might try to make a novel out of. It starts off with a couple of kids and how crummy their lives are.

viewtopic.php?t=58963

Thanks alot. :)
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Thu Feb 18, 2010 5:12 pm
MiaParamore says...



Name: Somewhere Lost
Genre:Action/Adventure
Length: Moderate
Brief Synopsis: It has a little background of US-Iraq war but a normal teenager story.Magical a little bit I would say.Sorry,can't reveal much.
I would be really grateful to you if you review it and you are surely up for some points. :D
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Mon Mar 01, 2010 10:58 pm
ToritheMonster says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59093.html

it's part of a series, so you probably won't understand it. I'm just looking for a grammar, etc. review.
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Tue Jun 13, 2023 10:58 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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