Young Writers Society

Say you've just written a poem. Or the first chapter of a novel. Or maybe you just did a drawing. You're anxious to show it off, but you want to improve upon it. That's why you just posted it on YWS, because you're looking for feedback. I would be quite happy to give you some. If you would like to see reviews I have done in the past, click here to go to my portfolio.
However, I do not review everything, so see the guide below as to whether or not I will oblige.

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(I will review)

• Poetry
• Art/Photography
• Original Fiction
• Non-Fiction

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(I will not review)
• Scripts
• Lyrics
• Fanfiction

All I need is the link to the piece, a title, the genre, and a brief sypnopsis would be appreciated, although it is optional.

I will take a queue of 5 at a time, and I will try to get the review back to you in 48 hours (at the most) unless my queue is extremely full or if I have other commitments.
Last, but not least, here is a gallery with links to completed reviews.

Art/Photography
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Prose
•My Phenology by fiction903
•When the Sky Bleeds by romance otaku
•Papillion by captain.classy
•The Assassin's Redemption by KanenRenoir
•Sloth by foxfire

Poetry
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Happy Writing,
Elinor Brynn

Please review "My Phenology"

You seem to be a list person XD.

Title: When the Sky Bleeds (Prologue)
Genre: action/paranormal romance

Word count: 2612
Synopsis: Set up for my book. Both very tied and unrelated to the actual book. A phycologist's new job puts a person's life in his hands. But what is his patient? (I know, kind of ignore that if you can XD.)

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Thanks in advance,
~Otaku

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Hey will you do this one for me girly?

Thanks

Classy

Fiction, done!
classy and romance, I'm working on your reviews right now.

Done Classy!
Romance, I'm on it!

Hey, I was wondering if you'd take a look at my novel for me(first chapter)

Name: The Assassin's Redemption
Genre: Fantasy fiction

Synopsis: The story follows the life of an Assassin by the name of Dracon Renoir
Word Count:807

Note: This is only part of the first chapter.

If you find time to look over it, I would really appreciate it.

Thanks

I be finished, Kanen!

Hey, Elinor...how are you?

Can you review a post of mine? I had edited it recently and can just make the last reviews?
Its for a contest due tomorrow

Title: Nature of Man: Sloth
Genre: otehr fiction

Word Count: 1488
Synopsis: This story explores the sin of Sloth and the its types. The type are divided to two figures (The MC and the people).
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58859.html#p660615

Thanks, Elinor

I reeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaalllllllyyyyyyyyy need some INFORMATION EXCLAMATION criticism! Please read ASAP!!! I haven't gotten any comments, and I don't know if People hate ti, or love it! Please tell me everything you TRRULY think! Some people son't what to hurt others' feelings, but I want to be shredded if that's what people really think of it. Any one who think they might what to read and shred me or comment please go to:
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Very desperate,
Triple Travel Tales

Hello, could you review my poem, "Bird of Recess"? It's in the Other Poetry section.

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Thanks.

–antimelrose

Hey, I posted another part to chapter one of my novel, The Assassin's Redemption, and was wondering if you could check it out. The word count is 927. Thanks if you can find time to do it. Here's a link:

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Fox, I'm finished. I just did antimelrose's poem, and Kanen, I'm getting to yours.

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Thank you, sorry if it's a little long :S

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