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Wed Feb 24, 2010 4:24 am
LittlePetRock says...



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Pleaseeee?
Star light; star bright,
It is time to take flight.
Off I go through the dark of night.
All my hopes and dreams in sight.





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Wed Feb 24, 2010 9:15 pm
BlueKangaroo says...



I just found this topic! :D I'm new here, and would REALLY love some reviews on my work.

"Every Fifteen Minutes" is a story about the consequences of drunk driving. Every fifteen minutes, someone in the United States dies in an alcohol-related car crash. In May, I took part in an anti-drunk-driving program at my high school. I found the video and pictures the other day and looked at them all, and decided to write about my experiences with the program.
I want to get the word out about this problem and the program, and I also want to know what people think of the story!





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Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:43 pm
Tenyo says...



I'll give you points in return for a review :)

It's called 'Mullings of a Failed Musician.'

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We were born to be amazing.





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Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:18 pm
Jas says...



I'll do both now :)
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Tue Jun 13, 2023 11:02 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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