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Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:13 pm
JSPike says...



Hello there!

Feel free to request reviews here. I'll get them done as soon as I can, taking into account school and what-not! :)

What I will review:

Any poetry,*
Action / Adventure Fiction,
Other Fiction,
Fantasy Fiction,
Historical Fiction (esp. Modern History and Roman (B.C)),
Non-Fiction,
Science Fiction,
Other Fiction.

And anything else you can to throw at me. :D

* Poetry reviews will focus more on content, context etc. more than flow, rhythm.

What I won't review (Unless you're desperate!)

Fanfiction
Romantic Fiction (Well, I could if you want, but I don't exactly read a lot of it myself!)

As I said, throw anything at me, and I'll be sure to review it to the best of my abilities! :)
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-- Edmund Burke





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Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:16 pm
Jennafina says...



Me please! I would love a review. I'd be happy to return the favor as well, if you've got something you'd like me to critique for you. I'm just really excited to edit my story and I haven't got a lot of comments yet.

Dancers in the Darkness

The only thing is that I've rated this 18+ and I see that you're fifteen. It's rated that way for drugs and mild profanity. If you're not comfortable reviewing it I would totally understand.

But if you do decide to review it, you should be super harsh with your critique. Thank you so much. :)
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 9:46 pm
Rascalover says...



This is only my second poem and i would love for some reviews on it

Please and thank you:
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Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:00 pm
JSPike says...



Both done!

Keep 'em coming! :D
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Thu Jan 28, 2010 10:11 pm
Jas says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post652037.html#p652037 Will you review this?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Fri Jan 29, 2010 5:47 pm
JSPike says...



Done! :)
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" All that is necessary for the triumph of evil is that good men do nothing "
-- Edmund Burke





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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:29 am
DreamyAlice says...



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