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Wed Jan 20, 2010 4:27 am
Jas says...



Hi, would you mind reviewing this?

Ignorance is Never Bliss

No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth.

Thanks! :)


~Jasmine Bells~
Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:58 pm
Amnien says...



Hey! I would very much like a review. :)

I would just like truth. Either nice or harsh. But if it's harsh don't go over the top rude if you don't have to. Please and thanks :)

Daring Frankie
Simply Crazed.

Once you see death up close, then you know what the value of life is. - SAW VI





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Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:04 pm
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Specials - Chapter 2
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Other fiction
HARSH PLEASE
"If the king doesn't lead, how can he expect his subordinates to follow?"





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Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:15 pm
AspiringAuthorA..M. says...



Are you willing to review even entire novels? :?
"Jesus said to her, “I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die. Do you believe this?”
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Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:42 pm
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Adventures of a Traveler: A Dark World
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I need a really harsh review, pick it apart please.
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Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:46 pm
AspiringAuthorA..M. says...



The Burning of nations

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It was killed by burning. Suspected foul play. Dissect it, please? :P

You can review it however you choose. I'm sure I can handle it just fine. :D
"Jesus said to her, “I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die. Do you believe this?”
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:40 pm
LookUpThere says...



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Could you please review? Thanks. TheNewHero





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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:23 am
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