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Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:00 pm
peanut19 says...



Hi I'm peanut, or Sarah which ever. I'll be happy to give reviews to anyone with a few exceptions.

I won't(can't :oops: )review:
*Lyrics
*Fan Fiction


I will review:
*Anything else.
**Poetry and Art aren't my strong points but I will still do my best to give you a good critique.

If you post on here:
*Leave the name of the work
*Where it's at.

I look forward to seeing everyone's stuff. Reviews will be done within a few days of you posting here. I hope I can give you helpful reviews, feel free to tell me if I can change the way I review to help you.
PM me if you have any questions.
~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


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Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:32 am
Mo. says...



Hey Peanut/Sarah!

Mind reviewing this for me?

Thanks!
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





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Tue Dec 22, 2009 11:05 pm
peanut19 says...



I'm finished with your review, Mo, I hope I helped :)

~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


P.S Got YWS?





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Mon Dec 28, 2009 3:50 am
underwater says...



Hi, Sarah. Can you review my most recent story?
Link: topic56092.html

Thanks!
"I must go in, the fog is rising."





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Tue Dec 29, 2009 10:17 pm
AspiringAuthorA..M. says...



Review a piece of my story on the narrative poetry forums titled: An action moment from my book
"Jesus said to her, “I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die. Do you believe this?”
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Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:06 am
peanut19 says...



Hey guys I'll have your reviews done before the 6th I promise. I'm sorry it's taking so long but I've been pretty busy. But you will get them :)

~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


P.S Got YWS?





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Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:22 pm
Stori says...



Peanut, could you review "Singing Wing" in Other Fiction?
I shall have a link in a moment.

*Edit* Here it is! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58360.html





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Tue Feb 09, 2010 9:50 pm
peanut19 says...



Okay, Stori, I reviewed it :) Hope I helped.

~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


P.S Got YWS?





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Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:46 pm
romance otaku says...



Hey ^-^. Would you mind reviewing the prologue for my novel, When the Sky Bleeds? It would also be really cool if you could read over the rest too... but that isn't on YWS, so you won't get a review point...

But, either way, here's the link: topic58506.html

Thanks in advance,
~Otaku
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Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:48 pm
BenFranks says...



'Ullo Peanut!

Would you mind reviewing my column-based book extract in non-fiction?
Here's the link: topic58584.html

It's called "The Art of Math & Ladybird Eating"





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Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:08 pm
captain.classy says...



Butterz! You wanna do this one for me?

Thanks

topic58650.html

Classy





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Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:30 pm
KanenRenoir says...



Will you review my fantasy novel. It's the Assassin's Redemption. Here's a link:
topic58466.html
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Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:30 pm
Fatimah says...



Hi!

Do you mind reviewing my two poems for me?

May I ask.. You review peoples poems by just replying right? Or is it something else :P
' Be yourself don't try and copy, we are called individuals for a reason * '





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Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:39 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hi can you review this for me. It's the prologue and chapter-1. U can just read the prologue if you want but I need reviews for my chapter-1. Thanks.

A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Sat Mar 20, 2010 8:04 pm
peanut19 says...



I'm sorry guys,for the lack of reviewing and such. I've been busy school and life and such but I'll get to them I promise.

~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


P.S Got YWS?








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— Kate Chopin, The Awakening