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Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:56 pm
Jennafina says...



Looking for a review?

I'm best at critiquing art, particularly drawings, because that's what I do the most of. However, I'd be happy to give my inexpert opinion on anything. :) I love Sci-fi, Fantasy, and good old Other Fiction. I'm not very experienced as a poet but I love it, read a lot, and will do my best.

As a reviewer, I'm not extremely harsh unless you ask me to be, but I won't lie to you. I tend to notice nitpicks like punctuation and word choice, but I try to review the piece as a whole as well.

The only things I don't really like to review are Lyrics, Fanfiction for things I haven't read/watched/played, and stories about Vampires.

That's it, I think? Just post a link to what you'd like me to review and if I don't get to it within 48 hours I'll send you 100 points. I might have to change that later but it seems like a good way to keep me from being a total lazy slacker. :P I'm trying to get my next blue star this week!

--Jenna :)
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Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:02 pm
Kylan says...



Well, for the good of a blue star or two, I'll give you a hand :P

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Thanks!

-Kylan
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and can see only two choices:
either go crazy or turn holy."

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Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:05 pm
AquaMarine says...



Well, I asked you on chat so here's the link!

Thanks so much!

~Amy
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Tue Dec 15, 2009 3:02 am
Kamas says...



This please!

It's the bottom part, not the top :) It's a thread so you might have to scroll a teensy bit. Thanks!

Kamas
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Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:52 am
Jiggity says...



Omnomnom!

Yus, please.

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Thu Dec 17, 2009 1:34 am
pudin.junidf says...



Hey Jenna!

Could you review something for me?
Is called Pudin's Image Shack.
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

Verlaine





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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:14 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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