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Tue Dec 01, 2009 10:00 pm
Elinor says...



Removed.
Last edited by Elinor on Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:36 pm, edited 6 times in total.

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Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:22 pm
Rascalover says...



let Me Love You chapter 13

Brief description: Isabella and Gary have fallen in love after she was in a car accident and her boyfriend dumped her. Shes pregnant and doesnt want to tell him but in chapter twelve ends up telling him, this is his reaction.

Romantic Fiction

Link: topic55152.html

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Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:52 am
Knurla says...



Get off my wall

Other Poetry

topic54996.html
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Wed Dec 09, 2009 12:03 pm
anima9 says...



A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten

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topic55391.html

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Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:41 am
captain.classy says...



Hiya Hunger Games actress. I was just wondering if you would read my story Papillion and tell me what you think! This is the first chapter:
topic55709.html
There is a prologue. It may help you understand a little more, but I don't think its necessary to read! Thanks a bunch.
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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:21 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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