Young Writers Society

Hey Lauren!

Can I ask for a review on topic88026.html <--- that?


It's the latest chapter in TSBI and I'd really like your feedback. Thanks!

~Jas

hello! I've been looking through the forums and your reviews are popping up everywhere! I would love love love if you could possibly critique my poem? I'm new to YWS, but am having so much fun, already! I've always enjoyed writing poetry/short stories, but now I have a place to become a better writer and improve my prose. I'd adore some good feedback!!!

this is it

thanks!

Got ya Jas

I'll get to your poem as soon as I can kendallelise!

topic88771.html
Please? <3
~peanut~

Hey Lauren:)
Could I ask you for a review of my novel? I am still in the process of writing it, so for now, I only have 4 chapters (but there are deifinitely more to come)!
It's a fantasy story. But I won't ruin it for you:D
Here it is: novel.php?id=1934
Thanks in advance!
polly xx

Gotcha kendallelise.

The current lineup is:
-peanut19
-polinkacreations

I'll get to you two as soon as I can! Have a bit of college business to finish up and then I'll have all sorts of time to devote to your reviews.

My reviews-waiting list has been cleared!

I'm currently competing in NaNoWriMo, but will get to any requested reviews as soon as I have time (though it may be a tad longer than usual for me to get time to review).

Hey, Lauren!

I've never been reviewed by you and it's a shame since you give pretty cool reviews. So would you mind reviewing this?

I know you're NaNo-ing, so no pressure, take your time.

Thanks a lot.

Sure thing, Mia! I'll get on it as soon as I can

Hey, Lauren!

I know you're good with novel intros and fantasy stuff, so I thought I'd ask you for a review of a fantasy prologue for me. When you get the chance, could you please check out this for me?

It's pretty ew at the moment, to be honest, but hopefully you'll be able to fix that. >.<

Thanks!

Please, do review this piece. It's an excerpt from my romance/crime novel.
post933049.html#p933049

Hey Lauren! I really appreciated your previous reviews, could you take a look at the two new ones posted, pleeeease?
topic90493.html
topic90491.html

Thanks in advance!

For the sake of me remember what's waiting, here's the current line-up:

-Skinsy(though it appears that's been deleted?)
-polinkacreations

I would just love a couple reviews on my most recent two short stories!
viewtopic.php?t=90961
viewtopic.php?t=91104

Thanks so much!
~Devan

Would you mind reviewing my novella? Ghost of Theater Two?
Prolouge:
viewtopic.php?t=90746
Chapter one:
viewtopic.php?t=90955
I haven't had time to post the next chapters yet. Thanks so much! ~Berlynn Rae