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Wed May 25, 2011 7:15 pm
Shearwater says...



IKnowAll - Done
luxevampwolfwithwand- Done
TaylaChase- Done!
Vampyre -Done!

For taking so long to get to them! :c
Last edited by Shearwater on Thu Jun 09, 2011 6:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Jun 01, 2011 3:00 pm
SparkToFlame says...



hey Shear!
I need reviews despertly, especially since this is for a contest, The deadline is June 8th, but it won't take me long to edit, so just if you reviewed it on June 8th, that'd be fine... *sigh* I am so sorry for the short notice!!!

viewtopic.php?t=81233

Please please please review it!
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Sat Jun 04, 2011 7:52 pm
Kagi says...



Hello dear...
We've been out of touch for a while but I suppose it's my fault as I haven't been on much as my exams stole all my time.

Anywho, I was wondering, if you would be so kind as to look at this for me please?

I'm rather fond of it but feel free to rip it to shreds. No worries if you can't!

LOFFLE you always,
Kagi <3
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Thu Jun 09, 2011 6:46 pm
Shearwater says...



Dramallama, I don't think the link is working.
Also, it's past the 8th - Sorry for not getting to this in time but if you still want a review, let me know.

Kagi - Done!
Last edited by Shearwater on Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:49 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Jun 15, 2011 8:26 am
Persy says...



HAI THERE PINK!
I wrote prose :3

I was wondering if you could please take a look at this. It's my entry for the big contest and needs simply oodles of work so please feel free to sharpen your teeth on it.

Thanks c:




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Thu Jun 16, 2011 3:24 am
SteviexOctopus says...



TITLE: 2 | Wicked Medicine (a scene from my novel, the Labyrinth Experiment)
GENRE: Science Fiction (though borderline Fantasy in some parts, its more like Star Wars then Star Trek, if that makes sense)
LINK: topic82614.html

The first scene: topic82336.html (You do not need to read this for Wicked Medicine to make sense but it would help should you choose to read on. Also it's fairly short, 521 words, and you do not have to review if you don't want to.)

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Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:33 pm
Kagi says...



Hai dear.

Wanna take a crack at this?

It's describing a scene-I'm testing my ability on description and creating a picture/image using words. So it might not be too interesting but hopefully you're ok with that, :lol:

Thanks and I'll review any time!
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Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:18 am
Shearwater says...



Persephoneia-Done!
SteviexOctopus-Done!
Kagi-Done!

Finally...
Other reviews, I'll be happy to take them but it might take me a while to get to them.
If you don't mind waiting two weeks or so (Since I'm on vacation) then go ahead and post a link! :D
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Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:54 am
joshuapaul says...



hey there,
JP here.

I am working on a novel and, although my first chapter got plenty of decent reviews, I don't think my second one will draw quite as much critical attention. Please ( if you have time ofcourse) review it!

Its a tale depicting my MC's last few weeks before dying of rabies.

heres a link:
novel.php?id=1604

thank you.
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Sat Jul 09, 2011 3:05 pm
velar says...



Hi Pink!
If you have time, could you review this?
It's a fantasy short story, about 7000 words long, and it's title is Light.
Thanks!
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Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:18 am
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post884571.html#p884571 Will you review this for me? Please and thank you.
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Tue Jul 12, 2011 12:58 am
ZannaShepherd says...



Hi, I have a couple pieces, I'd love to get reviews for.

Cosmos (Outer Space)- Fantasy Short Stories

viewtopic.php?t=84055

No Air - Romantic

viewtopic.php?t=84039

Thank you!
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Tue Jul 12, 2011 2:45 am
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Shearwater says...



Thanks for the reviews, I'll try to get to them soon but you'll have to wait! =D

Also, I'm going to be closing this thread for now until I get things straight and have some more time.
Please don't request any more reviews until I reopen this again. ^__^
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Mon Jul 18, 2011 4:02 pm
Kagi says...



Because you review art (Very Thorough) I'm going to ask for you're help on some little thing I did inspired by slippers.

I'm not really good at this editing stuff but as it's only a bit of fun, I'd love an opinion on this

Thanks,
Kagi
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Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:09 am
Shearwater says...



Re-Opened!
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