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Sun May 01, 2011 4:23 pm
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peanut19 says...



Hi, Pink! Here's the link to my novel. There are 2 chapters up right now (each in 2 parts) I really only need reviews on the second chapter but if you are just looking for things to review all 4 parts could probably use a little something. topic55706.html Thank you!

~peanut~
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Mon May 02, 2011 6:41 pm
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Shearwater says...



Kay, all of them are done!

I'll be more than happy to take up more!
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Tue May 03, 2011 12:30 am
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KnightlyAngel09 says...



Hello!:)

You mind poetry? Please review this if you have the time. post856381.html#p856381
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Tue May 03, 2011 8:14 pm
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Kagi says...



First half decent thing I've written since writers block, so have fun with this one if you please;

post856481.html#p856481
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Thu May 05, 2011 4:16 pm
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Isha says...



Pinshwa. I so didn't even know that you had one of these things.

Could you pretty please review my might-be-awful-but-I-don't-know-for-sure-yet poem? :3
topic80466.html
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Sat May 07, 2011 4:30 pm
Shearwater says...



Done.

I shall be happy to take up other requests. ^___^
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Mon May 09, 2011 9:13 am
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Hecate says...



Hey, can you review my short story for me?

post859783.html#p859783




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Sat May 14, 2011 4:44 pm
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Shearwater says...



Stelagineva-Done!

Sorry it took me a while but I finished it.

Keep the requests coming!
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Sun May 15, 2011 9:56 pm
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GirlInTheMirror says...



Hi! You probably don't remember me but you reviewed my work at the beginning of the school year and it was amazingly helpful. Will you pretty please do it again? Thank you!!!
post861772.html#p861772




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Mon May 16, 2011 8:34 pm
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sarebear says...



Hi pink!

This is the first chapter of a Romantic Fiction book I'm working on (that doesn't really have a title as of yet). I'd love a review for it! topic54707-210.html

Thanks so much!

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Mon May 16, 2011 11:03 pm
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Shearwater says...



GirlInTheMirror- Done
Sarebear- Please provide a correct link to the topic. ^___^
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Tue May 17, 2011 7:16 am
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IKnowAll says...



I have other ones but I really only care about this one right now haha:
topic80885.html (chapter one)
topic80994.html (chapter two)
That's all I've got so far... Thanks in advance!
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Sat May 21, 2011 5:54 am
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MadameLuxestrange says...



Hey Pink! Was wondering if you'd review my short story? Here's the link :) http://youngwriterssociety.com/topic81141.html

Cheers,
Luxe :D
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Mon May 23, 2011 3:09 pm
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TaylaChase says...



Hey, I was looking for some reviews so I was hoping you could review my Fantasy Fiction, titled Wings.

Here's the link
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You don't have to read it if it's absolutely too boring and horrible, but thanks :)
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Wed May 25, 2011 7:12 pm
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Vampyre says...



Hey Pink!
Would you very much mind reviewing my poem?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post865211.html#p865211

Thank you :)
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades