Young Writers Society

Here are some examples of my reviews;

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You will see I do a full-story review. I can review with punctuation editing as well, or just the classic sense check and perspective.

If you want a review, please fill out the following form;

Name of piece (please nothing too massive, I will only be doing one chapter at a time) :
Genre (I will review pretty much anything) :
What you want reviewed :
Anything to add? :

I do not ask for anything, though you can tip if you like.

Durrance/Kate

Hello daydreamer here:

Would you please review the first chapter in my novel if you have the time?

Name: I don't have a title, it's merely called ''A Holocaust Novel''.
Genre: Historical Fiction

Extra Stuff:
I realize that the first chapter has nothing to do with the Holocaust but that comes in later, so I'd rather not be nit-picked about that
Other than that feel free nit-pick away!

Thankyou- daydreamer

My story is... horror...ish?

Here is the first part - Back to Square One (1)

Then, here is part two - Back to Square One (2)

Also, I don't mind nick-picks, if you want to, go ahead. I want your opinion on it and maybe a star if it's good enough?

Hi, this is Fruit! xD

Could you please review my 1st story?

Name: SSBB New Adventure Story FanFiction

Genre: FanFiction

Here is the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54552.html

It doesn't matter what kind of review it is, as long as it's constructive and has at least a couple nit-picks.

Anyway, I also would like to know if you could follow the story even if you haven't heard of Super Smash Bros. Brawl. (SSBB) Thank you so much!

D@y Dre@mer, your review is done. xLogan and Fruit, yours are coming up .

D@y Dre@mer, your review is done. xLogan and Fruit, yours are coming up .

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