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Tue Nov 10, 2009 11:56 pm
xLogan says...



Here is a really short story bit.

viewtopic.php?t=54297


Then here is a short story, like 1k words.

topic54258.html

They are both in action/adventure. Please review.

Logan. :)
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Wed Nov 11, 2009 7:24 pm
MissMiaFacinelli says...



xLogan ->> DONE!
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Wed Nov 11, 2009 9:48 pm
xLogan says...



Thank you!
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Sun Nov 15, 2009 1:25 pm
MissMiaFacinelli says...



Desperately seeking pieces to review!

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Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:37 pm
MKate says...



Since you're desperate- here's an oldie I'd like some more criticism on... the thing is, I don't really...uh...know how to...uh...give you...uh... link...uh... it's in Other Poetry and it's called "Dawn".^^
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Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:48 am
xLogan says...



My story is... horror...ish?

Here is the first part - Back to Square One (1)

Then, here is part two - Back to Square One (2)

Also, I don't mind nick-picks, if you want to, go ahead. I want your opinion on it and maybe a star if it's good enough? :D

You've already done the first one, I think! So, do the second one please? :) Thanks.
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Wed Nov 18, 2009 12:46 pm
MissMiaFacinelli says...



MKate->>DONE!

xLogan - Part One->>DONE!
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Thu Nov 19, 2009 12:24 am
MKate says...



Thanks, Mia!
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Thu Nov 19, 2009 3:00 am
Kamas says...



Ehh why not? I'll request a review!

The Scarlet Ibis

A very short Other Fiction piece. I need a review just so I can have something to work on when I go back to edit.

Thanks for all your help, and if you ever need a review there is a link to my WRFF thread in my signature.

Kamas
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Fri Nov 20, 2009 1:42 pm
MissMiaFacinelli says...



xLogan->>Part Two DONE!

Kamas->> DONE!
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Fri Nov 20, 2009 7:40 pm
ToritheMonster says...



Hi! you're welcome to review any of my story. :mrgreen:
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Wed Nov 25, 2009 1:34 pm
MissMiaFacinelli says...



Dreamy115->>DONE!

However, please post a link in your post, it is more conventional. Also, search for the "Links" thread (it's either in The Lounge or The Information Desk, not sure which) and it will tell you how to edit links like my signature.

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Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:45 am
AlphaGirl01 says...



I have another story for you to review! It's 6K+ words and it mentions Aimee Cullen. I'll post a link.
Here it is. Hope you like it!
post626369.html#p626369
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Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:39 pm
Young gun says...



I wanted to know if this one sends the message across clearly:

viewtopic.php?t=50678
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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:07 am
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Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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