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Sat Nov 21, 2009 4:22 pm
AquaMarine says...



Hey Kams! I've procrastinated on NaNo and written ... something so would you mind reviewing it? It's an other fiction piece called Dear Daisy. I'm not too sure about it yet, so any feedback would be wonderful!

Thanks!
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Tue Nov 24, 2009 2:38 am
Awakening says...



post623798.html#p623798 could you review this one for me, im entering it in a competition and would love your feeback, go as deep as you want!
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Wed Nov 25, 2009 9:15 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Kamy!!
can you please review this for me?
Its called I'll mis you my beloved friend

I would appreciate so much your help.

But anyways.
Thanks so much!
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De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:59 pm
Day says...



Mind reviewing my script?

topic56568.html

thanks in advance I really appreciate it.
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Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:10 pm
*coco says...



Hey Kamas! I hope you could check out my story Of Loss and Love, it's a romantic so I'm not sure if that's okay. There are seven chapters so far, I know that's kinda long but I would really love to hear your take on the story. Here's the link for chapter 1:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html
Thank you, I really appreciate it!
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Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:42 am
Kamas says...



Oh god. I keep forgetting about this thread. *closes*
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

#tnt





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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:39 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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