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Sun Sep 27, 2009 4:18 pm
Explosive_Pen says...



Wheee! Hi!
I know I have a WRFF thread lurking around somewhere in the depths of deep dark deepness. But it's lost and feeling rather neglected since I didn't review during JulNoWriMo, so it ran away from me. So sad, I know.
Anywho! You'll find that I'll often forget to check this thread, so if your request goes long unnoticed, don't hesitate to PM me. I'll try to check up on this as often as I can, but I have the memory of a goldfish.

You can read about what I will and won't review and my review style in the Instructor Specialties thread, or, if you're a lazy bum like me, I'll just tell you here. ^^

I'll review pretty much anything as long as it's not:
1) Historical fiction
2) Manga
3) Lyrics
4) Horror
5) Scripts
6) Obscenely long (Actually, that depends... you might just have to wait that much longer for your review)

You can ask me to do a line-by-line or an overview, or both (I'll most likely end up doing both regardless ;) ). You can also ask me to focus on specific things, like grammar, characters, plot, et cetera.

Alrighty then. So I'll leave you now with this small insight:

Go Grammar Nazis, Go!
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Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:59 am
asxz says...



Hi, could you please take a look at: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53251.html many thanks! ありがとございます<--- if that' just boxes to you then don't worry! Thanks again!
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Sat Oct 03, 2009 9:22 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Hi Explosive!!

I was wondering is you could review this poem please?
topic53456.html

It's called The War wind

Thanks for your help
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

Verlaine





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Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:25 pm
wookielover17 says...



Hi Explosive!!! I was um wondering if you could review my story "Learning the Truth" (I suer it's not as corny as it sounds!!!) I would really apriciate it if you could focus on the grammar, charecters and plot. If that's ok? You don't have to review all of the chapters if you don't want to. The one I really want reviewed is Chapter six. But I'll post a link to the Prolouge just in caseyou wat to read all of it so you wont get lost. If you don't want to read all of it you can just skip right to chapter 6. No problem with me. Here it is:

viewtopic.php?t=49812

Hope you like it and thanks!!! (sorry about how long this is. I tend to ramble. :lol:)
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Tue Oct 06, 2009 5:15 am
empressoftheuniverse says...



Hello, I was wondering what your definition of horror was. Not for this story that I want you to review, but a future one...
Anyways, 1,658 words. Scarecrow.
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Sat Dec 26, 2009 9:08 pm
*writewatiwant* says...



Penny =D

Would you mind taking a look at my new story? It's romantic fiction, for a change xD
post633778.html#p633778

Hum, you'll have to read the first chapter <.<
topic55860.html

Thanks!
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Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:26 pm
KanenRenoir says...



Could you review the first chapter of my fantasy novel. If you will, thanks.

topic58466.html
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 2:23 pm
LookUpThere says...



topic58409.html

It's called the Janitors -- Prologue. Could you please review? I thought the name would be a hook, it was before...





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Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:46 pm
*coco says...



Hey Explosive! I hope you could check out my story Of Loss and Love, it's a romantic. There are nine chapters so far, I know that's kinda long but I would really love to hear your take on the story. Here's the link for chapter 1:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html
Take as long as you need!
*coco
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Tue Jun 13, 2023 11:04 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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