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Wed May 27, 2009 8:50 pm
Sins says...



Hey Music x
Long time no speak eh? :wink:
Could you please review my fiction.
It's short so it shouldn't take long!

Meg xoxo

topic48542.html

Thanks!
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Sat May 30, 2009 12:12 pm
Musicaloo7311 says...



Done with Meg's. :D
Click-ity click! Reviews here. :)
The Completely Evil Plan.

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Sat May 30, 2009 12:27 pm
afeefah says...



Hi Music! Could you please review my story? it's sci-fi and there's two chapters.

topic46148.html

thanks!

Afeefah :D





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Sat May 30, 2009 2:43 pm
Musicaloo7311 says...



Afeefah's is finished.
Click-ity click! Reviews here. :)
The Completely Evil Plan.

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Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:42 pm
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afeefah says...



Hi again Music! Third chapter's up. Would you mind having a look?

topic46148.html





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Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:46 pm
afeefah says...



Hello again Music! The third chapter of my story is up! Could you please review it?

topic46148.html

Thanks!

Afeefah :D





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Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:23 pm
*writewatiwant* says...



Music-poooh!

Would you please (does puppy eyes) review my entry for Rosey's contest?

Which path to take?

Thanks!
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Fri Jun 19, 2009 11:27 am
Crouching Tuna says...



Hello !

Please have a look at my prologue to my novel

topic49035.html

I hope it's interesting enough for you to review.


cheers
Tuna
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Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:32 pm
Musicaloo7311 says...



Hi guys! I'm going to close this down for a few days as I catch up on the reviews I still owe. I forgot to close it when I was out of town, so I have a few to catch up on. :)

Love,
Music
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Wed Mar 31, 2010 7:38 am
ChristianAlexander says...



Hey, Music! :smt003

My name is Chris. I love writing realistic fiction and I have a short story that I would love to get reviewed. If you could review it for me that would be excellent. Be brutal and honest please! It does me no good if you are holding back. I love the honesty :D

Much Love,
Chris
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Wed Mar 31, 2010 5:23 pm
MiaParamore says...



I want a reply for my story:

A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
Chapter-2

I already ahve many reviews for my prologue but would like to have for chapter 1 and 2.
Thanks
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
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Sat Jun 17, 2023 9:21 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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