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Sun Jan 03, 2010 8:13 pm
olivia1987uk says...



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Pretty please :) Don't need a full review as its not more than a few paragraphs...just want to know if its worth carrying on with :)
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Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:30 pm
cosby says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56525.html

Please could you review this please? It is an Action/Adventure but I really would like a full review which includes all aspects including the grammar, the characters, the plot etc.
Thank you.
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Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:09 pm
Moriah Leila says...



Even though it has taken me forever, I am finally caught up with reviews and ready for more! I have changed what I will and will not review, so you might be interested in checking that out. Snoink has awakened the poetry critique within me! Anyways, keep them coming people!!
I am not addicted to reading, I can quit as soon as I finish one more chapter.





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Mon Jan 25, 2010 11:01 pm
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Lane Render says...



Adventures of a Traveler: A Dark World
topic57683.html

I need a really harsh review, pick it apart please.
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Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:05 pm
captain.classy says...



Hey girl.

I'm trying to get my friend into this site, but her work isn't being reviewed. Would you do it for me? Thanks

topic57732.html





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Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:56 am
PenNPaper says...



Hey Moriah, I have this story called The Elemental Guardians Chapter 1.
Here's the link
topic57974.html
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Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:52 pm
BenFranks says...



Hey fancy reviewing a bit of sarcastic, ranty humour? :) I know it doesn't sound all that appealing but you mentioned you commented on entertainment so here y'are:

The problem with it is topic57293.html (My first ever featured bit of work! XD)
It's a disaster topic57357.html
Could it be more ridiculous? topic57694.html
Dictionary part one topic57771.html (not actually a "dictionary" just some satirical defintions...)

All extracts from my column based book. Take as long as you like! :)
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 2:26 pm
LookUpThere says...



Could you please review my Action/Adventure story?

The Janitors - Prologue:

topic58409.html





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Thu Feb 11, 2010 9:41 pm
Moriah Leila says...



All reviews have been completed. Sorry it has taken me so long. This next week I will probably not be able to do any reviews as I will be getting my wisdom teeth pulled. Feel free to post your reviews, just know that it may take awhile to get a review from me.
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Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:50 pm
LookUpThere says...



Right, Hera Moriah! Thanks for The Janitors review. I have a friend who's kinda new, only 11 and I think she needs a better review than mine. Please review. She postedl ike 8 chapters and doesn't understand the turn off factor. Anyway, see what you can do:

topic58745.html

Thanks





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Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:50 pm
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Wed Feb 17, 2010 5:21 pm
MiaParamore says...



i would like you to review my story'SOmewhere Lost' from Action/Adventure section.I know it's not your favourite genre but give it a try.
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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:11 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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