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Sat Apr 17, 2010 3:15 pm
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mimimac says...



Hey Evi. :)
Would you be so kind as to review this for me?
topic62104.html

It's in dramatic poetry... I just need some honest reviews please. :)
xx Mia
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Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:31 am
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antimelrose says...



Hello Evi! Could you please review my poem? It's in Dramatic Poetry.

topic62442.html

Thanks!

–antimelrose
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grace finds beauty in everything... makes beauty out of ugly things/U2




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Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:22 am
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Maddy says...



Hello, Evi!
If it's not too much trouble, do you mind dabbling your review time in a fan-fiction piece of mine?
topic62138.html
Thanks!
-Mad
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This awesome post bought to you by me. :)




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Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:04 pm
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Lava says...



Hey Evi!

Do you do non fiction?


I'd love some comments on this topic62786.html .

Thanks.
~Lava
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Sat May 01, 2010 6:23 am
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Navita says...



Evi, here's an interesting piece for you to review. I only made a quick attempt at reviewing it, but I'm sure you'll be able to expand on what I came up with:

topic62831.html#p696562




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Tue May 18, 2010 8:37 pm
Evi says...



*poof!*
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Thu May 27, 2010 4:56 am
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Navita says...



Hey Evi, here again (it's called 'joining forces/minds' :P)

Wondering what you made of this:

This is not a poem

Have fun!




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Sat May 29, 2010 7:05 am
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Navita says...



ME again. With my own poetry this time for you to dissect on thematic and stylistic levels, mwahahahaha. Good luck :D. And thank you.

'In the Yellow' and 'Earth to Earth.'

Oh, they're in 'Other poetry.'




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Sat May 29, 2010 4:43 pm
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Kyllorac says...



Poor Mochi in Dramatic Poetry has been stuck with just one review for almost a week. If you would be so kind as to put an end to it since I can't?

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Sat May 29, 2010 8:48 pm
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BenFranks says...



Evenin' Evi(;

Would you mind taking a look at the prologue to my brand new novel?
topic64453.html

Essentially, it's a thriller, but this part is meant to just introduce a bit of mystery and an essence of danger so I wondered what you thought!

Thanks, Ben.
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Mon Jun 21, 2010 7:22 pm
Evi says...



No one loves me, huh? Any takers?
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:53 pm
Puffycherry says...



Can you please review this for me.

Link; topic65658.html
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Tue Jun 22, 2010 4:31 am
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Flower~Child says...



This is part five to my romantic short story. Will you review it for me, if you would like to read more of the other parts feel free to.

topic65718.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Tue Jun 22, 2010 4:31 am
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Flower~Child says...



This is part five to my romantic short story. Will you review it for me, if you would like to read more of the other parts feel free to.

topic65718.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:44 am
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radiatemyveins says...



Hello there! It would mean a lot if you could take some time to review this bit of poetry I wrote, called 'Enter the Menagerie.' It's in other poetry, just a basic, short stream of consciousness dealio-thang. Thanks in Advance.(:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post709940.html?hilit=Enter%20the%20Menagerie#p709940