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Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:56 am
PenNPaper says...



Hi Evi wondering if you could review this for me.
It's called Saving Zanica and it's under Science-fiction.
topic56438.html
Writing is all about imagination~




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Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:23 pm
Evi says...



Done, PNP!
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Thu Jan 07, 2010 1:52 pm
Demeter says...



Evi love! How about this:

-shire, in Other Poetry?

Just tell me if you need anything reviewed in exchange. :)


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Sun Jan 10, 2010 3:33 am
Jiggity says...



*pokes head in* This place seems popular.

You should review mah stawry. Maharaj the Magician It's chapter two but you don't exactly need to read the first bit to understand it or anything. :)

Twould be appreciated.
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Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:07 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Today She Dreams

:D

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You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.




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Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:12 pm
Evi says...



*poof!*
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:59 am
Rascalover says...



Can you please review a chapter from my romantic fiction piece

topic58540.html

Tiffany,
Points are rewarded :)
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*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html




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Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:14 pm
BenFranks says...



Hey Evi!

I see you don't really review non-fiction so feel free to pass on this if you like! :)
It's a column-based extract from my book. (Hoping to get published! xD

The Art Of Math & Ladybird Eating topic58584.html
(More alternative kind of comedy)

Could it be more ridiculous? topic57694.html
(More satirical & sarcastic comedy)

Thanks,
Ben
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Sat Feb 20, 2010 4:08 am
antimelrose says...



Hello Evi! Could you please review my poem, "Bird of Recess"? It's in the Other Poetry section.

topic59114.html

Thank you!

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Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:37 am
Evi says...



*poof!*
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:56 am
MiaParamore says...



Can you review this?
I know its much so I won't feel bad if you turn it down.
A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-2
A criminal's heart chapter-3
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:45 am
SophieSays says...



Hello.
Please will you review the first part of my short story? It's called 'The Man In the Top Hat/Emilie's Diary - Part One' and you can find it here: post687280.html
If you would like me to review something of yours in return let me know!
Thanks in advance,
Sophie
If you would like a review, please visit my review shop: topic61400.html :)




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Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:32 pm
emmylou1995 says...



Hi, Evi. Would you please reveiw the prologue and first chapter of my book? I really want to know if they are good.

Links:
Prologue- topic60846.html
First chapter- topic61776.html

Thanks alot! If you want me to review something of yours in return, just PM me. I Love PM's!
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:23 pm
Skins says...



Hey Evi :)

Could you review this for me please?
It's a random chapter,of my fantasy fiction. Is that okay?

Thanks,

xoxo Skins
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Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:03 pm
Evi says...



Done, done, done, and done!
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.