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Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:37 am

PhoenixBishop says...

Never mind minne I have enough reviews on it now.

This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

Death~

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Fri Feb 27, 2009 8:27 pm

Lord Anzius says...

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40424.html
Prologue - Ashurbanipal
Historical fiction

And the first chapter (I had to post it in two parts I hope you don't mind :shock:

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic41214.html chapter 1 part 1
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43712.html chapter 1 part 2

To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
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Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:20 am

KailaMarie says...

Sorry I haven't checked this for a while. I'll get to it all as soon as I can!

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Sat Mar 14, 2009 6:28 pm

KailaMarie says...

Ok, I'm all updated except for Lord Anzius. I'll get to that one as soon as I can. (:

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Tue Mar 31, 2009 7:52 pm

KailaMarie says...

Ok, I'm all caught up! Anyone else?

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Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:51 pm

KailaMarie says...

Somebody please?

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Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:10 pm

MuffinWriter says...

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If you don't mind. It's a poem. Not very good, but hopefully you won't die while reading it.

Why does believe have the word lie in it?

*like the line in my dp? Check out my one poem: "In Repair". I made the dp to match the poem.

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Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:12 pm

MuffinWriter says...

Oh, and please do nit-pick the best you can for the poem. I know it may not be easy, but its a poor poem so you'll find plenty of things.

Why does believe have the word lie in it?

*like the line in my dp? Check out my one poem: "In Repair". I made the dp to match the poem.

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Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:48 pm

wiccaryan says...

I was wondering if you could review the first chapters of my book?

topic46539.html

i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx

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Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:56 pm

KailaMarie says...

MuffinWriter- finished!

wiccaryan- started it, but ran out of time, I'll finish when I get a chance. Sorry!

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Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:48 am

LisaMCooper says...

Oooooo!! Will you critique my story, Carnelian? It is in Historical fiction. I would very much appreciate it if you would. Thank you so much. ^^

-Lisa M. Cooper

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Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:19 am

pinkangel54123 says...

topic49534.html

Review this one! It makes me happy and hopefully you'll like it.

Want a heavenly review?

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Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:55 pm

KailaMarie says...

Ok, I finished! Sorry it took so long, I forgot to check this thread.

Anyway, anyone else need a review?

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