"Show us, don't tell us!" They say, but sadly I realize I'm a storyteller. When I cross over and accept maturity, when I want to change then maybe I'll be willing to show people my prose and not tell them. As a writer I have to grow.
I reviewed A Lost Soul (which I really liked by the way), and I'll do the other two when I have more time. I'm so sorry I've taken so long! I haven't had time lately, plus I always forget to check this thread. I'll do the other ones really soon, though!
Could you please review the first chapter of my novel. I'm sending it off this week and would like a critique before I do so that it's pitch perfect. I'd so appreciate it if you could. topic52431.html Prydwen Hall
Hi Kaile, I want you to please critique something that technically isn't fanfiction. It's my own story, but written in the style of R.L.Stine's Goosebump novels. I would love if you could review the second part. You might want to read the first part first, though, so you know the storyline, then read the second part and review it. Here are the links: post680204.html post690775.html (I don't mind if you nitpicks it, I need it to be perfect for my little brother ) Thanks a million! -Maddy
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