Young Writers Society

I'm not sure I ever want to review a poem ever again, but if anybody has any short stories for me to review I'll be very happy to do so.

(The above two have been done)

I really appreciate it if you reviewed the first and second chapter of my novel, Empyrosis.
It's about teenagers, though, but I can assure you they're not angsty and hormonal. It's actually a fantasy novel about a pair of twins --- one is an eudaemon (guardian angel) while the one has special powers of her own.
Thank you so much!

Done : )

Hey Firestarter! Here is the link to a chapter in a novel I am writing:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic67620.html

So basically it's about these teenagers (sorry, I know you don't like stories with them) who get these powers, and all this other stuff. Sorry, it's really hard to explain, but I assure you it's not as cliche as it sounds. Well, thank you!

Done!

Would you mind critiquing this for me? It could use some polishing and tightening up.

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Hey Cuz'. Jem told me you were involved in this site when I was writing on holiday, so thought I'd check it out.

Fancy reviewing part of my novel?

It does after all say you'll review fantastic fantasy, I can at least offer the second part. I can pay by I.O.U or empty promises, your choice. Ta.

Hey Jack

Could you please review my short story 'Play.Pause.Rewind.' topic67782.html

Its for a Contest about friendships and it's generally about what happens when some friendships spiral out of control. It IS about teenagers >.> but I tried to make it as un clichéd as I could.

I have a poem if you would review it? topic67891.html Love you avatar by the way!

I appreciate if you rip this apart. :3

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Thanks in advance!

I've found it! YES!

Part One: topic77182.html

Part Two: post832609.html#p832609


Could I please get a review of the above? It's for a class, due Thursday and needs tons of help. Thanks in advance!

So jasmine has sort of prodded this sleeping dragon into raging, fiery anger.

Post requests here and there's a possibility I might maybe read it and critique it.

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Dat dere Jack, you should find it different and fun to play with. Thanks!

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That Sacred Slut.
Dramatic Poetry I think.
It's about female empowerment.
A review wanted...please :3.

Hi,

Could you review this poem by Raz and I for the poetry pairs contest? topic77699.html

Thanks so much. ^^