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Jack's Critique Emporium [BACK IN BUSINESS]

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Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:18 pm

Firestarter says...

Heads up: the three reviews above this post will be done on Sunday because of work commitments & other things. Sorry for the delay.

How young are you?
How old am I?
Let's count the rings
around my eyes.
--The Replacements

idraax: Europe is weird then. Math should be standardized internationally.

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Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:13 pm

ultraviolet says...

Hey, would you mind taking a look at Colors? It's mine and 322sivart's entry to the Poetry Pairs contest thing, and we kinda need all the help me can get.

Colors
Lyric Poetry
Colors, as you can guess, and how they tie in with things

No rush, except before the month's over. Thanks a million. =D

"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

~asofterworld.com

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Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:10 pm

CelticaNoir says...

Hey Jack!

I just posted my first YWS novella ever, Blackened Runes. Mind taking a look?

"We weren't there, sir." "That's interesting. We have proof that your shoes were. Now how do you suppose they got there without you in them?" - Murdoch's Mysteries

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Thu Sep 01, 2011 10:14 pm

tgirly says...

I hear you give really good reviews, so I was wondering if you could review the first chapter of my novel, Hunted. Thanks!

Run
runrunrun
if you have wings then fly,
you have to escape
just leave the rest behind
-By eyeofthestorm in honor of a character of my invention.

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Sat Sep 17, 2011 6:26 am

joshuapaul says...

Hello,

here, an easy one.
topic87682.html

#TNT

Read my latest

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Mon Dec 17, 2012 10:57 pm

Firestarter says...

Roll up! Roll up! Jack's Critique Emporium is open to the public once more! With whole new offerings! Dazzling reviews! Sparkling critiques! Fantabulous comments! We've got all your critiquing needs under one roof!

Seriously, feed me.

How young are you?
How old am I?
Let's count the rings
around my eyes.
--The Replacements

idraax: Europe is weird then. Math should be standardized internationally.

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Thu Dec 20, 2012 4:24 am

Kafkaescence says...

work.php?id=98364

hmu bro.

"A book should be the ax for the frozen sea within us."
-Franz Kafka

For the brave of heart.

#TNT

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Thu Dec 20, 2012 8:39 pm

Firestarter says...

I'll probably get your review done on Sunday, next two days are mad busy for me with work!

How young are you?
How old am I?
Let's count the rings
around my eyes.
--The Replacements

idraax: Europe is weird then. Math should be standardized internationally.

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Fri Dec 21, 2012 10:55 pm

Firestarter says...

Done! Reviewing is harder than I remember.

How young are you?
How old am I?
Let's count the rings
around my eyes.
--The Replacements

idraax: Europe is weird then. Math should be standardized internationally.

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Fri Dec 21, 2012 11:00 pm

AquaMarine says...

If you have time, I would hugely appreciate a review.

work.php?id=98457

Please don't hold back - I'm trying to get into the swing of writing poetry again ...

Thanks!

"It is curious how often you humans manage to obtain that which you do not want."

-Spock.

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Sat Dec 22, 2012 7:40 pm

Elinor Brynn says...

It would be much appreciated if you could take a look:

work.php?id=98486

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.
-- Walt Disney

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Sun Dec 23, 2012 10:32 am

Unconsoled says...

Could you take a look at this, please?

Thanks.

“The parts of me that used to think I was different or smarter or whatever, almost made me die.”
― David Foster Wallace

'You've been told and not told'
--Kazuo Ishiguro

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Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:18 pm

ShadowVyper says...

Firestarter wrote: I've been a struggling poet for a few years now, so if you're a new poet or in a similar situation, I think I can empathise and assist.

New poet? That's me, and I assistance would be lovely!

I'm going to enter this piece work.php?id=98548 in a competition, and would like to know if it's contest-worthy.

Thanks!

~Shady

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