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Sun May 30, 2010 5:43 pm
canislupis says...



Hey Rascalover!

Yours in done. Hope I helped at least a little. :)

Come on, people, I need more!




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Sun May 30, 2010 6:30 pm
canislupis says...



Done, classy! I really liked your story.

Anyone else?




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Sun May 30, 2010 11:44 pm
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LauraElizabeth says...



Do you think you could review the first two chapters of my fantasy novel? The link is in my signature. Thank you :)




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Mon May 31, 2010 12:26 am
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SilverSharpie says...



Title: The Specters of Verity and Angelica Flink
Genre: Fantasy
What you'd like me to look at: Everything if you have the time, it's pretty brief
Link to page: topic64414.html (also in my signature)
Know what I would love? A review!
topic64587.html




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Mon May 31, 2010 2:03 am
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canislupis says...



Silversharpie--Done! Hope I helped. :)

Laura--Read it, but not had time to post the review yet. You should see it soon, though.

Attolia--Sorry this is taking so long. XD The third one should appear shortly.

Anyone else? I can take up to two more, I think! :)

Lupis




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Tue Jun 01, 2010 11:59 pm
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canislupis says...



And... Done! I am now only nine reviews away from my goal!




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Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:24 pm
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canislupis says...



*Bumpity bump bump bump*

I know, I'm shameless. But come on people! I'm only three reviews away from another star! I could do that today!




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Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:36 pm
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austenite says...



No need to be shameless, I'm a lover of reviews, so if you could kindly review Part One of The Fall, my latest work here topic64749.html . Gratefulness, hugs, and possibly a gift after much sucking up will be given!
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
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Fri Jun 04, 2010 8:21 pm
canislupis says...



Done! Thanks for asking me--I loved your story. I am now only two reviews away from my goal!

Anyone else?




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Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:53 am
canislupis says...



Hello!

I have reached my goal. But, since I achieved it in less than half my time goal, and still have fiteen days left, my new goal is 470.

Request away!




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Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:22 am
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Attolia says...



Hey canislupis,

Thank you again for all the reviews.

I really did not think I'd have chapter three up this fast, but here it is
topic64924.html

I'd love it if you could give it another review!

Thank you tons,

Attolia :D
well you'll work harder
with a gun in your back!
for a bowl of rice a day




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Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:58 pm
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canislupis says...



theboss--Done!

Attolia--Sure thing! I'll get to it as soon as possible.

Lupis




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Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:01 am
canislupis says...



And, done! As usual, that was an absolute pleasure to read. :)

Anyone else?

Lupis