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Okay... could you please review this for me... there isa prologue, but it doesn't have to be read. Thank you!
Title: S.P. 1.1 / S.P.1.2
Genre:
Rating: Zilch
link: Part 1 & Part 2

Thank you immensly!

Sure! You should see the first one up soon.

Um.... what if I don't have any food?

I can't believe the last post was almost a year ago!

I need more stuff to read, people!

* resurrects thread *

Hi there canislupis. I would love a review on my romantic short-story,Love has No boundaries(I). Thanks for the review in advance and can you take a special look on the dialogue and sentence construction because I'm still a bit weak in those areas. `
~Shubhi

Done!

Any other takers?

Would you please review Chapter 3 of The Fox and the Prince? There's nothing in particular I'd like you to focus on, so critique away.

And.... Done!

Again, I'm open for business!

Sneak Peek of: The Yangziat System Mission
By: JackpotJohnson
Thanks that would be great

Finished! Sorry I couldn't be more helpful--fanfiction isn't really my thing.

Next?

Hey, Canislupis. I like your reviews. I often find myself reviewing a piece after you and agreeing with almost everything you said. So I'd love to get your thoughts on something of mine. The novel I'm working on right now - you can find the prologue through chapter two in my portfolio - is most important to me (if you critique that you can just do a very general, broad review on all I have so far as a whole), but I also just wrote a short story in Historical Fiction Short Stories that needs reviews. So it's up to you, whichever you want to critique; I'd love your thoughts on either.

Heya

Will you review some homework of mine please? I want to get it up to a decent standard because of the fact that it is homework. Right now, it's lacking. It's a monologue and it's pretty short, just in case you wanted to know.

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Thanks in advance!

xoxo Rhian

Skins, yours is done. Hope it helped a bit.

Attolia, yours should be done soon.

-Lupis

Attolia, most of yours are done as well. I'm more than halfway to my goal of one hundred reviews before June 20!

Anyone else?

Can you review apart of my romantic novel please and thank you ?
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