Rosey! I have something that could use some help...It's my first story pretty much all year, and it's also my first ever fanfiction. It's not extremely fan-like fiction, but if you don't want to review it, please don't! I seriously don't mind.
Hey, if you can fight your way through a massive spoiler I'd love it if you could review my poem, Photograph to Sand. Thanks Oh and please read the spoiler. You'll see why.
Thanks in advance! Oh, link's in the signature *points* Riiiiiiiiight...there.
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
I would really like an indepth critique and a lot of feedback ( if you like it, what you don't like...etc). I appreciate it since this is my first chapter and it's really important that I get this right for the rest of the book. Thank You very much for just reading it. PM if necessary.
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A hero isn’t defined by winning. Loads of heroes die in the effort. Most of them never get any recognition. No, a hero is just somebody who does the right thing when it would be far, far easier to do nothing.
Hi! I wanted to know if you would review my "Of Mice and Men" comparison essay. I'm quite proud of it (a bad thing for a writer) but I do think it needs some good old-fashioned criticism. Thanks! viewtopic.php?t=74133
“Maybe it’s fate that Hound ate the map. Maybe we’ll discover soemthing wonderful while we’re lost.”-The Penderwicks
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