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Sun Jun 20, 2010 6:15 pm
JFW1415 says...



So it's summer time and I'm open for business once more! Sign up. =]

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Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:33 am
peanut19 says...



I'm first go me! Will you read And The Light Fades? Or like a chapter of it. It's in advanced critiques not novels. Linkage for you: topic58539.html
Thanks Jen!

~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


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Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:26 am
screamandshout says...



Hey would you take a look at this for me?
topic65475.html





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Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:41 pm
JFW1415 says...



Your both done. Any others?

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Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:54 pm
Puffycherry says...



Can you please review this for me.

Link; topic65658.html
I do not have a short attention span, I am-Hey look it's a sparkely KITTY! Quick Catch it!





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Wed Jun 23, 2010 3:51 am
JFW1415 says...



Puffy, I'll do yours in a sec.

This is once again closed. If you noticed my recent contest, I received over 20 entries, so I now owe over 100 critiques. Haha. =] Opening again soon.

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Sat Jun 17, 2023 9:22 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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