Young Writers Society

I really hope you aren't busy.
But could you take a look at this? It's our Poetry Pairs entry and we'd appreciate your opinion.

Thanks abunchizzles!
<3

Hello there, Demeter.

Could you review this poem?

I will be really very grateful.

Thank you. You are amazing.

*bump*

Hey guys, keep 'em coming!

Heya, Dem!

Would you mind reviewing a contest entry for me? It's really shabby, so I'd like to get it at least somewhat decent by the time the contest's deadline arrives. It's a general fiction short story.

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Please and thank you!

Done, Skins! Thanks!

More, please!

Open for business?

Have a look at this please?

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thanks in advance!
JP

Done, JP!

Any more?

Hey!

Is there any chance you could take a look at this.

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Thank you

Hey Demi!

I don't think I've ever asked for a review before, so here's a new start!

If you don't mind, would you take a look at this for me please?

It's for Ranger Hawks competition that is now closed. I'd still love some reviews on it though as I'm still rather fond of it and never got that many reviews!

No bother if you can't,
Kagi xoxo

Hi there, was wondering if you might be willing to review this for me. It is Romantic Fiction, and I'm going to enter it in a contest.

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Thanks!

Hello, long time reader first time poster,

A gift, for you.

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Deme,
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Your thoughts, please?

Hi there,
if you want to review my poem
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it is called "Clouds" and is about writers block [genre narrative poem]
Thanks, Oliver

Hiya mum! I was wondering if you could please take a look at this general fiction short story for me, as I'm quite new to the genre and everything. I'd greatly appreciate it ^_^

Hi Do you think you could review my poem for me? It's kinda suckish, so I understand if you don't want to. XD

It's dramatic poetry. Here's the link;

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Thanks!