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Fri Feb 13, 2009 10:58 pm
Evi says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42459.html

Name: Watermelon Rinds
Genre: Other Fiction

It already has some really good reviews, but you bumped yourself and I can always use more feedback, ya? :wink: For Clo's Monster Mash contest. The deadline is the 20th, so if you could do it before then...

Oodles of thanks!
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 4:50 am
Maki-Chan says...



How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:42 pm
Blink says...



Evi--done! Well written!

Maki-Chan--You posted in a lot of threads and you've had a lot of reviews and they're mostly very comprehensive. And, since I'm busy at the moment, I might not be able to review it.
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Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:15 am
anti-pop says...



Hello, Blink!
Mind giving this a review?
The Childhood of Mr. O'Connor
Other Fiction

Thank you so much! ^^


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Thu Feb 19, 2009 9:10 am
Jiggity says...



Dude, my stawry is lonely without your company.

Shadow of the Sun (S.O.S)

topic43805.html
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Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:49 am
Galerius says...



I need cool people like you to review my work:

Title: Pleading to a Wet Sun
Genre: Lyric Poetry

topic43953.html

Many thanks beforehand.





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Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:26 pm
Blink says...



Wow, turn your back for one day...

:)

Will get these done today/tomorrow morning. Thanks everyone!
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Sat Mar 14, 2009 4:12 pm
Blink says...



Any more? I've finally got some time to do reviews, so now or... later!
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Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:51 pm
imapoemperson says...



topic45481.html i really need some help with this peice id appreciate your help!
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Wed Jul 29, 2009 3:34 pm
Blink says...



Blink declares this thread reopened.

I'll need stuff to review when I get back, see. So get posting.
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Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:45 pm
Demeter says...



Heh, I never knew you had a thread here.

topic51550.html

And it features a dancing dog!

Well – no, but thanks anyway.
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Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:51 pm
Blink says...



Go for it, peoplez. Just read the first post of this thread beforehand, please.
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Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:19 pm
bubblegum says...



Want to review this? It's fantasy fiction. : )
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60214.html
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Sun Mar 21, 2010 1:27 am
Sins says...



Hey there Blink :)

Could you please review my fiction?
It's pretty short so it won't take long!

Thanks

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60411.html

xoxo Skins
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Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:12 pm
Hannah says...



Hi, Blink!

post677362.html

Would you mind dropping an opinion on this? :D
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