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Poor Imp's Poor House - Poor No More



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Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:52 pm
Poor Imp says...



'Course, Jared. ^_^

Raimunda-- Er, have you got anything you'd like critiqued specifically?










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Wed Jun 11, 2008 2:26 am
JFW1415 says...



Hello! I'd love some help on Suicide Kills Us All. Mind taking a look?

Thanks!

~JFW1415





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Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:59 pm
LoveableLittleSock says...



Hola! If you could rip this to shreds, please do so. And don't comment on the vampire ending and how cliche it is - I've come to that realization as soon as the words flew from my fingers.

Alliteration!

I have my English Final on Wednesday. FUN. Anyway, it's an entry for the contest JFW is holding, and she extended it... so I have more time. Whoo - hoo! So, will you critique? I have cookies.

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Mon Feb 01, 2010 12:59 am
Poor Imp says...



Er, mostly back. See edited first message.









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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:28 am
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