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Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:03 pm
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Via says...



Want a review from moi? Post your link here!

I will try to get to everything....eventually ;)

Thanks!
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"I think I'd miss you even if we'd never met." -The Wedding Date




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Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:05 pm
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OverEasy says...



Hello!

So some people get the ending on this poem, and others do not. I was wondering what you think :)

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Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:21 pm
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Via says...



Done!
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Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:39 am
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JFW1415 says...



*Poke* If you have time? :smt112

(Come on, you know you want to! I gave you an awesome smilie! ;P)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

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Wed May 07, 2008 1:30 am
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JFW1415 says...



Don't know if you're still checking this, but I'd love one on my new story:

Part One
Part Two

You can ignore the previous one if you don't have time. I still need to work on it, but this one's more urgent. (And I would have just edited my post, but I wanted to bump this to grab your attention.)

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Fri May 09, 2008 12:01 am
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OverEasy says...



Hi Via!


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Please and Thank You!
"I’m selfish, impatient, and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I’m out of control, and at times I’m hard to handle. But if you can’t handle me at my worst then you sure don’t deserve me at my best." --Marilyn Monroe