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Will Review For Food
Come closer, my pretties. (Re-Opened!)
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Wed Dec 03, 2008 8:13 pm
Hi there Penguin.
I'd be delighted if you could review this:
Thankyou very much.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Mon Dec 08, 2008 5:52 pm
I closed my eyes and pointed, and here's what I got:
Pretty please and thank you. Sorry it took me so long.
"Half the time the poem writes me." ~Meshugenah
Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:26 am
Scavenger 1.5. Please? Like, pretty please?
"Tv makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."
Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:08 am
I have a couple; I won't give you my fan-fics, unless you have read Warriors or Redwall.
A True story/event
My first story-ever.
Fake, or Real?
For the February CIA contest
Whatever you feel like doing, or think needs doing.
Your monthly Bible quote: "Faithful are the wounds of a friend; but the kisses of an enemy are decietful." Proverbs 27:6
Fri Aug 05, 2011 5:02 am
This space now open for Reviews!
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
Fri Aug 05, 2011 5:32 am
Could I please have a review on that?
Thanks! I'd really appreciate if you worked on the characters, plot, imagery and stuff rather than nitpicky grammar stuff. Thanks again!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.
Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:42 pm
Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:17 am
Please read my story and tell me if you like it or not.
Fri Aug 26, 2011 1:59 am
I don't need any comments on punctuation/grammatical inconsistencies; I really just need it based on style, content, readability, etc. Thank you!
Idea? Drop me a line!
I love to research things.I do mostly nonfiction pieces such as current events, political/ethical/religious topics,and historical/scientific research.If you've a question you'd like answered or a topic about which you'd like to know more,I'll gladly write you a piece on it!
Sat Aug 27, 2011 6:50 am
If you're not too busy, I need you to read over this.
I've seen you give really good reviews and I'm in need of a really good review right now. Like I say, I personally don't like the beginning, the diary entry, and I'm thinking of replacing it with a short glimpse into my main character's future - as that is more exciting.
Anyway, I really want you to give this a thorough review.
"Have them lay us in a basement, smash some bottles on the ground, and say we couldn't tell the difference between the feeling and the sound." -
, by La Dispute.
Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:32 pm
Another one for you. Take your time it's in ten parts and rather long
Sun Sep 18, 2011 9:15 am
Tue Jan 24, 2012 10:47 am
I dug this board up specifically my friend.
whenever you feel like having a go
'Tis the season! Donate your poetry.
Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:53 am
Do you mind reviewing for me?
I just want to know if you like it, what you like if anything, if you don't like it, what I could do better
"Elementary, my dear Watson"
Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:35 pm
my most recent poem. Thanks in advance!
Donna: You alright?
Doctor: I'm always alright.
Donna: Is 'always alright' secret Time Lord code for really not alright at all?
Donna: Because I'm alright too.
I review everything.
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