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Thu Sep 25, 2008 2:05 am
Icaruss says...



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Would you, please? =D
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Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:51 am
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PenguinAttack says...



Done, darlings.
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Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:19 pm
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If youre not too flooded, please? :D
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Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:14 pm
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Chapter 2, thank you!
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Mon Oct 20, 2008 1:23 pm
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olivia1987uk says...



How about it? Lol, hope you don't mind critiquing this for me!

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Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:54 am
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BigBadBear says...



Hey, Penguin! I only have one critique on this, and I really need help with it.

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Would love help on this.




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Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:36 am
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Conrad Rice says...



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Could you rip this apart please?
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Tue Oct 28, 2008 11:18 pm
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Twit says...



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If you have time, please? :)
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Sat Nov 01, 2008 9:29 pm
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Lord Anzius says...



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I shalt ask thee these questions three: Can thou review this piece, please. Can thou help me to make this piece better. And can thou review the other capters ??? :D
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:20 pm
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Next Scavenger, please? :D
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Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:08 am
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Conrad Rice says...



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If you've got the time, I'd like it if you'd look at this. It's a longer story, to be split into parts for the viewing ease of everyone. If you don't want to review each and every part of it, I understand.
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Sat Nov 08, 2008 7:36 pm
Maki-Chan says...



prologue and chapter 1 need reviews ^_^


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topic35820.html -chapter 1
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Thu Nov 20, 2008 5:36 pm
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OverEasy says...



Pengu my darling!

How I miss your reviews.

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Pretty please?
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Sun Nov 30, 2008 10:35 pm
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Conrad Rice says...



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Hi Pengu! If you would rip this to pieces I would appreciate you.

I know I asked you to review a work called The Masquerade. Disregard that. I'm not going to work with that anymore.
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Tue Dec 02, 2008 11:46 am
mizz-iceberg says...



I know you have many critiques to do but if you don't mind doing reviewing mine, that would be awesome!!

It's a short story.
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