Hello, Kitty. I need a lot of help with this poem I spat out yesterday. It's called This Winter and is in Other Poetry. It's very rough and I need some help smoothing it out because, if it turns out okay, I plan to turn it in to my Creative Writing teacher.
Avec moi, avec toi, avec coeur, Avec un et c'est pris Nos têtes, nos langues, Nos oreilles étaient toujours remplies Mais les histores et chansons de la perte d'innocence M'ont tellement hanté Que j'ai remis mes mains dans mes poches Et ma langue dans ma propre tête
“Destiny is usually just around the corner. Like a thief, a hooker, or a lottery vendor: its three most common personifications. But what destiny does not do is home visits. You have to go for it.” ― Carlos Ruiz Zafón, The Shadow of the Wind
Would you mind reviewing my Novella? It's called Ghost of Theater Two This is the Prologue: viewtopic.php?t=90746 This is chapter one: viewtopic.php?t=90955 I haven't had time to post the next chapters up here yet. Thanks so much!
I was wondering if you could take a look at this. It hasn't really gotten any attention which is pretty disappointing, so I figured I'd venture over here. Only when you have the time, of course. Thanks!
"So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads." — Dr. Seuss
If I could get another opinion of my story, it'd be great. This is the only story I've ever written where I'm willing to re-edit until it's at its peak.
Could please review this for me? It's a dramatic poem entitled "A little bit Stronger" but I'm accepting suggestions on the title. viewtopic.php?f=8&t=
You are more than the choices that you've made, you are more than the sum of your past mistakes. You are more than the problems you create, You'v been remade.
Hi all! I am back to reviewing and I'm sorry for any links I missed because of the upgrades and the breakage of said links. If you want to post them again, by all means do or feel free to ask for a review on something else.
I'm going to try and do a review a day to earn my tortoisedom but so far I keep failing. I'm going to start up again tomorrow and if you give me links, this will be helpful.
could you take a look at my chapter one please? its called The First Last Stand of George T. A. Mongtomery: Chapter One
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