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Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:56 pm
Rydia says...



I'm on holiday at the moment but will get to this as soon as I return! <3
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Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:12 pm
Rydia says...



Done!
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Tue Jul 10, 2012 9:37 pm
Eliza:) says...



Hi. Can you review: work.php?id=96355

Thanks.
There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.
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Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:42 am
VampireSenshi says...



When you have the time please :D

- work.php?id=96361
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NIGHT is always watching...
  





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Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:39 pm
Huli says...



Could you do my short story, "The Purple Light"
  





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Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:53 pm
Twit says...



When you have a minute. ^_^
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Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:11 pm
Rydia says...



All caught up :)
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Thu Jul 19, 2012 6:35 pm
polkadotph says...



Could you do my fantasy novel chapters? Its chapter one and two. Thanks! (:

work.php?id=96486
work.php?id=96530
  





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Fri Jul 20, 2012 4:15 pm
Rydia says...



Both done! 6/100 reviews :D

Anyone else wanna help me reach 100 by October 1st?

I should probably remind people that I rarely give stars (I'm always forgetting) and I don't do mushy, gushy praise (except where it's really well deserved). What I do give is my honest opinion of the work and some advice on how to fix the issues.
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Fri Jul 20, 2012 7:06 pm
Twit says...



Ooh, your star is pretty. Can I pet it?

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Sat Jul 21, 2012 12:23 pm
Lothbrok says...



Pretty please
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95339
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Thu Jul 26, 2012 4:48 pm
prolixity says...



Could you take a look at this poem for me? Thanks!
She reflected. "I prefer stories about squalor."
"About what?" I said, leaning forward.
"Squalor. I'm extremely interested in squalor."
  





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Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:06 am
Valentine says...



Hey, if you could review this: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=96649 that would be sick. Its called the other side of the glass. THis is just part one but its only going to be a short story. Thanks so much!
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Fri Jul 27, 2012 5:03 pm
ImHero says...



edit.php?id=96570

Could you review my poem for me? Thank you :)
new profile: profile.php?u=36729
  








It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien