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Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:45 pm
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Rydia says...



I have all the purple stars, om nom nom! But now I want the blue ones. You see, I like blue and I've had the purples for far too long.

So post your links here and give me something to review. If anyone wants to recommend the work of others, that's fine too but otherwise here's your chance to self-advertise.

The system worked well last time so once again, I'll edit my title to 'Not Accepting' when I start to get a back-log and then change it back when I've caught up.

What I review: I will critique absolutely anything you give me, but I'm not great with fan-fiction so critiques on those pieces might be a little brief. I'm best at poetry and while I won't turn away a long piece, please realise that I will need more time to complete the request and may fulfill shorter ones while working on it.
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Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:09 am
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tinny says...



Ah, I always feel so cheeky asking people for critiques ><"

but if you could take a quick look at A&E 2.1 it would be funky as jam
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Sun Mar 09, 2008 1:59 am
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Sleeping Valor says...



^_^ New prologue for DoaV!

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Rydia says...



ltf - you shouldn't. If people are offering, they have their reasons and seriously, you're helping me out.

Both shall be done before the end of today. I'm putting a few hours aside this afternoon so I need at least another four or five links.
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Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:59 pm
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Matt Bellamy says...



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I am upset about the lack of critiques my story has gotten so far, especially a story I'm so serious about making work. :(

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Sun Mar 09, 2008 1:06 pm
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Dynamo says...



I wouldn't mind getting some critiques for my new fanfiction, Outpost 101.

Here's the first three chapters:

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topic26875.html


I don't really care if you critique for spelling or grammar, I just want to know if you think it's funny.
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TheD2 says...



Here is my new story Albus, a fanfiction, but I put it on Action/Adventure don't ask why I don't really know why any more either. Anywho, this is chapter one.


topic26930.html
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Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:37 pm
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Sleeping Valor says...



Here's one for a friend of mine. It's a great story, but seems to have been buried. =P

Preface: topic24346.html
Chapter One : topic24409.html

There are 8 chapters right now. If you have time to read all of them and critique, then that'd be great!
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Prokaryote says...



Here's another if you need one: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic26198.html

Cheers!

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enjeru says...



here's one!!!

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Rydia says...



Still got those last three to finish but I think I'll leave them until tomorrow. Hope you don't mind and feel free to add more to the list. I've worked out that I need to do about eighteen a week to reach my target so don't worry if it's starting to look like I've loads to do. It will just mean you might have to wait a day or two. Thanks for your support,

Heather xx
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Autumn says...



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I would very much appreciate a critique =)
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Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:57 pm
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AWritersFantasy says...



This is chapter two of my Child of Ashes: Outcast story...I don't remember, but I think you might have already read at least the prologue? o.O I dunno. But I only put up the first part of chapter two last night and it doesn't have any reviews, so...>.> :D




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chocoholic says...



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I'd love a critique on this songfic I did.

Thanks!
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niteowl says...



I'd really like another opinion on my story "Woman of the City", especially now that I'm thinking about expanding upon it.

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